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MissM (Signed) on Nov 13, 2011 06:37 pm (Sixty One)
I'm so proud of our Justin. Remember what a prick he was in chapter 1? :D  Nice growth in character for them both! 

Author's Response: Me too! Yes it's an amazing change! Thanks so much for reading Miss! Love ya!



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 13, 2011 02:32 pm (Sixty One)
Twins!! So exciting!!! I can't wait to see daddy Justin :) what a wonderful surprise. I am so glad her parents are changing. She needs her mom! This chapter was well worth the wait. Great job. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it.  I was on the edge with the idea but just decided to go with it.  More is coming soon...I can't wait for Daddy Justin either :)



MissM (Signed) on Nov 11, 2011 03:24 pm (Sixty)

Damn. That might have brought me to tears. Might. 

 



Author's Response: If you cried over this chapter I am so flattered. It means I did something right! Thank you so much! More soon!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 11, 2011 11:02 am (Sixty)

Aww...you let him heal!!  I'm so happy and as I sit here crying, I realize that you my dear are brilliant.  It's something to realize that someone needs help just as much as you did.  You know, kids have a way of seeing the good in people and what the boys (namely Austin) sees in Kimberly, Justin finally does also.  I loved it!

Ki

P.S-Thanks for letting us see the progression.  Now, let's see that scrapbook lol :) 



Author's Response: I did! Aw I can't believe I made you cry! Lol I don't know if I'm that brilliant but thank you so much.  I'm so glad you loved it! Love ya girl!! I'll have more for you soon :)



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Nov 11, 2011 07:20 am (Sixty)
I'm not going to lie, this is the very first thing I check for in the morning when I get off from work. I'm really in love with this story and can't wait for the next update as usual. You do an absolutely FANTASTIC job! :)

Author's Response: Lol i'm so flattered. It amazes me how hooked people are on this story.  I really appreciate the comment, thank you so much for sticking with this! I'll have an update very soon i'm sure! Thank you again!



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 11, 2011 07:18 am (Sixty)
Oh wow here come the water works lol. Such a good chapter. So sweet. I'm glad him and Kim are going to work things out. He needs his family even if she's a little nuts lol

Author's Response: aww thank you so much! Yeah lol everybody has a crazy family member one way or the other haha! More soon!



MissM (Signed) on Nov 10, 2011 08:14 pm (Fifty Nine)
Wow, what a nutjob! Good he got those boys away from her. 



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 10, 2011 05:41 pm (Fifty Nine)
Aww this was sad. Poor boys. I can't imagine :( loved the update. Can't wait for more:)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it even though it was sad :) Working on more for ya!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 10, 2011 12:56 am (Fifty Nine)

So...you went a completely different direction than what I remember but it's as always still good.  I can't believe his Aunt Kimberly!  How can you show someone GOD's love if you're spitting that kind of garbage around.  She gives us good Southern folk a really bad name.  I bet the house Austin's sitting at is his parents home.  I wish there was some kind of way to make Justin understand what his mother had to endure growing up in a family like that.  It seems like she accepted what happened to her (as far as her husband goes) and decided not to fight her family anymore.  I think it would give Justin much peace to know how his parents (or at the very least, his mom) felt about him before they passed.  

He needs to heal Court.  Please let him...

And again, it's like I'm talking about something real...you amaze me with your writing mama :)

Ki 



Author's Response: I know...the whole time I was writing it I was like Ki is gonna flip lol.  I want Justin to heal too...something tells me he'll eventually find the way ;)  I'm so glad you liked it even though it got changed up, and I"m working on the next update for you! Love you thanks for your brilliant comments as always!



StarStruck24 (Signed) on Nov 10, 2011 12:31 am (Fifty Nine)
Good gracious his aunt is a nutcase. I'm glad they went out there, but...man. What Davey said to Abbey was so sweet though - I hope Austin comes around and they get this resolved! Eek!

Author's Response: I know, she's kind of a freak...it's crazy :(  I'm working on the next update, glad you liked this one! More soon!



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 09, 2011 03:45 pm (Fifty Eight)
This chapter was so sweet. I want a Justin haha. I can't wait to find out what happens in memphis! Can't wait for more! I love it!

Author's Response: Lol I want want too! More is coming, thanks so much for reading!



Jbear (Signed) on Nov 09, 2011 12:37 pm (Fifty Eight)
Awwww...... I can't wait to see what happens once he gets back home because he is such a different person than he was the last time he was there. Great update. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! another update is in the works for you!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 09, 2011 12:58 am (Fifty Eight)

It's cute to see how excited Justin is about becoming a father.  He's really grown up in these last ten chapters or so and I'm happy because he's become a whole person.  Abbey really is good for him and I hope they have fun in Memphis.

Ki

P.S-Thanks for the shoutout mama.  I didn't know I inspired anything, but it's cool that you think so.  Love you and thanks again :) 



Author's Response: Aw i'm glad you liked it.  I'm proud of Justin for changing lol, as if he's a real person.  And of course I would shout you out.  You helped me with this whole Memphis idea and I am very greatful :) Love ya!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 08, 2011 09:33 pm (Fifty Seven)

Wow!  I don't know what else to say to that.  I mean I knew Braeden wasn't going to be the same after Abbey left but I really didn't expect this.  I hope it all works out for him :)

Ki 



Author's Response: Thanks Ki! I hope so too! Hope you are well :) I'll have more soon!



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Nov 08, 2011 08:03 pm (Fifty Seven)
Poor braeden :( that makes me sad. So glad for the update! :) I love how fast you are. You're amazing!

Author's Response: aw i know...he's going through too much.  Aw thanks but i don't think i'm all that.  I'm almost done with the next chapter :) more soon!





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