Comments For Business First
a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 12, 2011 02:19 pm (Two)
You've done such an incredible job of writing this Business Justin that I can't stand him, lol.  I'd really like to smack the sense into him!  Fantastic story.  Update soon, please!!

Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it! Yeah, Justin needs some sense smacked into him by somebody!



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 11, 2011 08:47 pm (One)
I like the idea of this.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I appreciate you giving it a chance.



a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 11, 2011 04:59 pm (One)
Hmmm, cocky, asshole Justin who is about to get a rude awakening...I like it!  I love the concept, it's so...new, lol.  Great start :)



Lady T (Anonymous) on May 11, 2011 09:01 am (One)
I Love a good story where Justin is a huge jerk in the beginning. Great 1st chapter! Can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Tina (Anonymous) on May 11, 2011 07:31 am (One)
He's such an asshole in this LOL, but I love the concept.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!



Lisa06 (Signed) on May 11, 2011 05:57 am (One)

A very good beginning! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!

xoxo



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Glad you are enjoying it!!





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