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Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 18, 2011 02:11 pm (Forty)
Oh how I look forward to these updates everyday. Fantastic job  my dear!! can't wait for the next

Author's Response: yay thank you! working on it now :)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 18, 2011 02:01 pm (One)

NO NO NO HELL NO! Poor Justin no why that selfish jerk. How could he knows how Justin feels about her. He changed FOR HER and now hes back he's playing the guilt card what the.... Screw that and Abby im so mad at her how could she. I mean I get it its her first love come back blah blah blah but really Justin loves her and she moved on what a pig he's being uuuuuuuuuugggggggghhhhhhh

BTW if you couldnt tell IM TEAM JUSTIN ALL the way



Author's Response: Oh no!! LOL. There's so much going on emotionally in Abbey's head it was really hard to get this chapter just right.  It made me feel really bad for Justin, but the same time I guess because they are my characters, i understand Braeden's aguish a little bit more.  Team Justin is awesome though.  i respect your decision, lol.  I'm working on the next chapter right now so stay tuned, and thank you for your feedback!



MissM (Signed) on Oct 18, 2011 01:07 pm (Forty)
Uhm WTF dude, you've been gone for 7 years! They had you declared dead, you selfish asshole! 

Author's Response: LOL ohhhh mannnn



MissM (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 10:32 am (Thirty Nine)
OMG. I don't know who to root for!!!!

Author's Response: Lol you and I are going to have to talk soon....



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 02:57 am (Thirty Nine)

Ok...now that the slow torture is over...

You are really the bees fuckin knees!


First off, I'm surprised that you cranked out three chapters in a day.  Inspiration much?  Anywho, I loved all three though they were kinda like torture for me.  I'm so afraid of what's going to happen that I don't know what to do with myself.  If I can ask you one small favor though...please, please don't turn Justin back into the maniacal man he once was.  Don't think I could take that. He's more beautiful now that he's let love in his heart and I don't want him to lose it.

 

BTW, totally Team Justin now.

 

Ki

 

P.S- Did it have to be on the news in front of the children?!   



Author's Response:

I have to tell you that reading your feedbacks made my day go a lot quicker at work today and kept a smile on my face!  I know, three chapters in one day...who knew? I did have lots of inspiration thanks to the people that have been reading this (hint thats you).  I know it's a scary time in the story, but I will do my very best to make the outcome barable.  I can't make any promises yet because honestly...I don't know what's going to happen either!  I will try my hardest not to make Justin into too much of a prick.  I know...the news thing.  I debated about how I wanted Justin to see it, and i thought the most realistic way to do it was with the kids.

 

I know you'd turn into a Braeden traitor eventually! LOL!




Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 02:49 am (Thirty Eight)

You. 

Are.

Evil!

Why????

Okay, now that that's over, I don't even know what else to say.  I mean I know you told me it was coming but one is never prepared for this.  Just so you know, it's like this shit is happening to me...crazy huh.  Freakin evil genius is what you are young lady.  

Ki 



Author's Response:

You can't say I didn't warn you!!! Lol. I cried when I wrote a couple of these chapters, so I know what oyu mean when you say you feel like it's happening to you. 

 

Am i really an evil genius?

 

I"ll take that as a complement :)




Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 02:30 am (Thirty Seven)

REALLY???

REALLY???

You just HAD to go and punch us in the gut like that???

REALLY???!!!

Moving on.... hehe :)

Ki 



Author's Response: Woops....



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 12:46 am (Thirty Nine)

I hate to see Justin fall like 3 steps back to where he used to be. But again I can't really blame him for preparing for the worst. I'm so confused just as every character in this story!! I feel for Braeden but I can't help but be Team Justin in this one.

Your story brings out every emotion in me. I absolutely love it!! Personally I like Braeden but I really want Justin and Abbey to make it out of this (that's a hint by the way) :)

Thanks for the quick update! Hope another one is coming soon. Can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response: I'm so flattered that this story has effected you so much.  It means a lot to me that you love it.  I know I'm killing you, but you'll have to read on and see what happens!  I have another update in progress and should have it up shortly! Thanks for your support again, it means a lot to me :)



samantha (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 10:35 pm (Thirty Nine)

OMG....MORE PLZ!!!



Author's Response: Working on it!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 09:56 pm (One)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa no no no Justin what are you doing and o my gosh you are killing it with the updates and clifhangers. I feel so baby for Justin and o just o thanks for such a fast update cant wait to read more aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa please stay with Justin Abby! Oh and the boys and Justin having to see that on TV ouch.

Author's Response: LOL you are hilarious! Workin on that update for yay ;)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 08:50 pm (One)
So amazing now you have to update FAST! Glad hes home and safe however I will be heartbroken if she leaves Justin there just amazing together! plz update soon and I cant wait to see what happens next way to leave me on a cliffhanger

Author's Response: I am working on the next part as we speak! Hope to post ASAP! So glad you are enjoying :)



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 16, 2011 06:22 pm (Thirty Eight)

I'm really glad that Braeden is okay and I don't blame her for the kiss. I thought I was going to be really mad but when thinking about...this is a guy who she really really loved, who she thought was dead and it turns out that he's alive!

Now I'm really curious to see how the rest of this trip is going to go. But I can't help but feel sorry for Justin right now and what he's going through also.



Author's Response: You analyzed that perfectly! I can't wait to get another chapter up for you! More soon!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 06:00 pm (Thirty Eight)
OMG!!!! I am freaking the FREAK out right now. Girl I am an emotional wreck over this story right now. Im scared to see who she picks.

Author's Response: LOL!! Oh mannnn. I'm sorry to say that even though I wrote it I'm freaking the freak out too.  It's like the story writes itself sometimes, so I have no control over what Abbey decides anymore!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 12:09 pm (One)

Sooo hooked she better not break his heart! Can't wait to see what happens ext



Author's Response: I'm glad you're addicted! More soon!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 08:57 am (One)
I'm so hooked on this story, it's nuts! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: You thanks for reading! I'll have an update soon :)





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