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SJane (Signed) on Nov 02, 2011 07:40 pm (Fifty Three)
omg i seriously hope this is going where i think it is.....eeeeeepppp

Author's Response: And just where is it going hmmmm? Lol more soon!



l-dawg (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 07:10 pm (Fifty Three)
This is such a captivating story! I just started reading it 2 days ago and I just got caught up. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Wow thanks for reading it all the way through! I really appreciate it and I'll try to get a new chapter uP for you soon!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 03:07 pm (One)
just soooooo good!!!! i can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: more is coming! promise!!



Tina (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 02:49 pm (Fifty Three)
More more more...

Author's Response: soon soon sooooon!



izzy (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 10:00 am (Fifty Two)
I loved the last couple of chapters. Please dont kill of braeden. I would cry. make him have a happy ending. keep up the good work and I hope your powers back on.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to make the ending happy if i can lol.  Thanks for the power wishes, I hope it comes back on soon!



MissM (Signed) on Nov 02, 2011 09:37 am (Fifty Two)
Squeee!!!! 

Author's Response: yayyyy



Tink (Signed) on Nov 02, 2011 09:08 am (Fifty Two)
Great chapter, so glad they worked things out. Can't wait to read more but don't want it to end yet

Author's Response:

Thanks! It's not over just yet ;) Don't worry! More soon :)




JoJo (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 10:14 pm (Fifty One)

Finally Braeden is making sense!! I'm really proud of Justin! He handled the situation great even though he probably wanted to beat Bray AGAIN!!

BUT I'm not really sure taking Braeden to Abbey is a good idea. Only because I think you're just teasing with this chapter and I'm worried Braeden isn't going to tell Abbey to be with Justin. I can't help but think  he's using Justin's love for Abbey to get to her.

I guess we'll find out! Update again as soon as you can! 



Author's Response: LOL you really think I'm evil don't you? Well, I guess I deserve that since I've played with your emotions so much thus far.  I guess you'll just have to read on to find out what happens! I'll be updating today so...hope you like it when you read!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 04:22 pm (Fifty One)

Look at my baby!  I'm so extremely proud of Justin right now that I don't know what to do!  I don't think I would have involved myself at all because that can turn out real bad. Also, thank GOD Braeden's come to his senses.  He knows things are too wrong with him to be the husband Abbey needs him to be right now.  She can't be everything to everybody, damn!  Good, good, good, good, good chapter mama. :)

Ki

P.S-Sorry about the storm.  Try and stay warm ok? :) Love ya loads!



Author's Response: I know! I'm really proud of Justin too.  He really kept his cool and did the right thing, and I'm happy for Braeden too.  He's going to be able to heal eventually and that's what I really wanted for his character.  So glad you liked it! More soon!  Oh yeah and the power thing...it SUCKS.  I'm using every free wifi spot I can to my advantage.  They say our power may be back by Sunday but int he meantime we are all miserable :( Talk to you soon I hope!



MissM (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 03:19 pm (Fifty One)
Yay! Had to happen. He did the right thing. So did Braden. He's so fucked up. 

Author's Response: Glad you liked it miss! more soon!



Jbear (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 04:08 pm (Fifty)

So I haven't gotten to comment in a while because I've been reading on my phone lately, but yea I was waiting to see how long it took Braden to flip out and hit her! SMH I'm just really glad Justin was there to get her out of there! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!



Author's Response: That's okay...I know how that goes lol.  I will have an update soon! I promise :)



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 30, 2011 06:54 am (Fifty)
Have I told you lately how much I love you? cuz I really do!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol aww thanks I love you too for reading! More soon! Yayyyy



candigirl23 (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 12:59 am (Fifty)
OMG!! This is getting so good!! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! More Soon!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 09:37 pm (Fifty)
YES!!! Not to Abbey getting hit but YES to the fact that Justin has her again! OMG! this is getting too GOOD for words. You got me checking the site multiple times a day like a crank feen! LOL thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of updates .I have a lack of power.  Hopefully Ill get more today! Thanks for keeping up with this!



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 09:20 pm (Fifty)

And Justin saves the day! I loved it! I'm really glad  Justin and Abbey got to sit down and talk. It did make me angry that she was still worried about Braeden after he slapped her! I really hope she doesn't go back to him. Braeden is not the same person and neither is she! And I think she's finally realized it.

Great update! What do you have in store for these two?! Can't wait to find out.



Author's Response: OKay so first off...so glad you liked the chapter.  Second of all so sorry it took so long to get back to you.  We have had no power for days! I'm going nuts, but i have found a place that's warm and has free wi fi sooooo maybe I'll get a chapter or two done today! I hope!  Can't tell you what I have in store, then I'd have to kill you lol... jk.





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