Comments For We're Halfway There
kb4jc (Signed) on Jul 29, 2011 12:12 pm (Chapter 24- Looks Like You've Met Your Match Chasez)

great chapter, just when she thought she was in the clear....nope...good stuff....can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: Just a little twist to keep things interesting ;) Thank you very much!! :))



sonadora (Signed) on Jul 29, 2011 01:43 am (Chapter 24- Looks Like You've Met Your Match Chasez)
That lady at the last part of the chapter is intriguing me. I mean, I like how Liz is stood up for JC and did not believe the woman's allegations and all, but I'm curious as to how the woman knows JC. Is she an ex or something? And does she have a part to play in his relationship with Liz? I wonder what JC has to say about this encounter. Or will Liz even mention the lady to JC? Bah, all the questions!! Haha. Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one. :)

Author's Response: Guh so many questions!! haha Don't you love it?! :P You'll find out what's the deal in the next chapter and what Liz plans to do about it.. I'm glad you enjoyed! :)) Thank you!!



Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 23, 2011 09:40 pm (Chapter 23- I Have The Recordings If You Want 'Em!)
Oh-my-gawd!! Loved the update!! Soooo happy that things have worked out between Liz and JC and they seem genuinely happy! And JC bought a house.....I can see an awesome future ahead for these two!! Awesome update =).

Author's Response: Megan! hi! :)) Lol Thanks for the review!! And i'm glad you enjoyed it!! I'm hoping to see an awesome future for these two as wel :))



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 18, 2011 09:06 pm (Chapter 23- I Have The Recordings If You Want 'Em!)

YAY! JC bought a house..and awwww I think that is real sweet that he's planning so far ahead , of being married to Liz, and having kids..AWWW! I love that you write this so well, it feels like IM there..*SIGH* Ok..um..I laughed when Chris was talking about Joey and Lance.. this line here "Well you see," Chris started. "Superman was trying to fly off the springboard out by the pool and lost his balance so he ended up just falling into the water and his ankle hit the board. So Poofoo over there-" he pointed to Lance as the blonde haired member walked into the room holding a bag of frozen peas. "-has to take care of him." LOLZ.. :P

And yes JC, you need a bib when you eat, haha! Liz is so off right now, yeah us girls get those days, so JC dear, you listen up.. :P And oooh he has something special in that navy blue box?? Nice..but now its not the time.. ;) Above all, yet another great job on this chapter..Thanks for the update.. :D



Author's Response:

Aww i just lovee the thought of JC being married with kids ;) Makes me happy.. Hmm We'll see! I'm happy i accomplished the task of making you feel like you were there with them. That's what i like.  HAHA again with the humour, Superman & Poofoo were in my head and i just had to include it! :))

I wonder what he has in that little blue box.. Hehe So let's hope that the 'right time' is soon then ;) Thank you very much! Very happy you liked it! :))




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 18, 2011 08:45 pm (Chapter 22- Mercedes Here I Come)

WOOO!! Ok, um..man where do I start? OOH! Im so happy that Liz took JC back, she's still not fully healed yet, but looks like she's getting there..love the sweet kisses they shared..Im soo happy! :) And I laughed at this line here "They heard the toilet flush and the door opened. Chris walked out, a relaxed smile on his face."Now that's what I call good urinating." He stated. LMAO! Only Chris would do something like that..HA! And I also like this line here "She rolled her eyes. "Dork, but I'm your dork." He looked her in the eye and spoke genuinely. "And only yours." AWW..CUTENESS.. *giggles*

Now, to conclude I love when all the guys were waiting to see if they continue there career, YAY!! They won! There gonna sing "Bye Bye Bye" now..soo awesome..*dances* Awesome job on this chapter, I really liked it.. :D Thanks for updating! *reads next one*



Author's Response:

Woohooo yes they are!! :D Yea, she's getting there.. Hehe Glad JC & Liz made you happy :)) Hahaha i tried to get some humour in so i just turned to Chris.. haha I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! :))




Mack (Anonymous) on Jul 18, 2011 03:51 pm (Chapter 23- I Have The Recordings If You Want 'Em!)
So you take FOREVER to update just to end it on a cliffhanger like that!?!? Come on, I need more! I'm pulling my hair out at the wait. I love how you got the two back together, she was standing strong but she wanted him as well but it was a nice touch. I also like how comfotable they are in the house already, like they've been living together for years. All of this sounds to easy though and I don't believe Allison is gone once and for all. Update again soon.

Author's Response: Hahaha this review made me smile! :)) I'll post more soon, be patient.. We have a deal remember?? As for Allison being gone.. Well we'll have to keep reading, which i'm sure you will :)) Thank you & i'll post more soon!



kb4jc (Signed) on Jul 18, 2011 01:09 am (Chapter 23- I Have The Recordings If You Want 'Em!)
very nice.....i am on my toes with this and thanks for the other review...can't wait for what's happening.... :)

Author's Response: You're welcome and thank you! :)) Glad you like!



sonadora (Signed) on Jul 18, 2011 12:45 am (Chapter 23- I Have The Recordings If You Want 'Em!)
They're back together! Yay! JC just needs to find the guts in himself to finally ask her. Me likey! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Haha Yes, he needs to! Will post soon! thanks for reading&reviewing! Glad you're liking! :))



Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2011 02:49 am (Chapter 21- There's Someone I Need To See)
AHHHHHHHHHHH I knew it!! What a bitch!! Grrrr I am so freakin angry, JC gave up Liz for that selfish bitch. jigdsiangijndsfainbgaegoaeigher....there all my swear words are out. lol. These last 3 chapters were A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I love the line at the end There's is someone I need to see....so awesome. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Ahhh yes!! She is a bitch! Ah well, hopefully now he can forget about her.. Thanks soo much for this review! Perfect thing to come home to :))



Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2011 02:43 am (Chapter 20- I'd Redo Everything In A Heartbeat)
holy moly...that was a very very emotional letter. Gotta say that I cried a little =(. Hope things can work out between them or something? Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Let's hope things do work out.. hehe Thank ya very for the review!! :)) Glad you liked the letter too :)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2011 02:48 pm (Chapter 21- There's Someone I Need To See)

"That little bitch!" Chris growled Chris dear, you took the words right out of my mouth.. OOH! THAT ALLISON IS A HUGE MOLERAT! *curses* I am saying so many choice words right now, I just wanna UGHH! Thank you Justin for eavesdropping, poor JC, he didnt know anything, and he was falling for it and everything, man..can I just hug him right now?? He needs to be comforted. *SIGH* Ok..um.. I love that Justin gave that freak Allison a good what for, this line here " "You know, I always swore I'd never hit a woman but if you weren't pregnant with an innocent child right now I swear I'd wipe the smirk right off that Botox face of yours" HAHAHAHA! LMAO! Botox face..lolz you tell her Curly.. :) Now, I also like when the guys were at the studio before this little incident happened, this line here "Uh, Allison throwing up and you feeding her crackers when I could be here poking fun at Joey's voice on these machines, I think I'll pass." Chris replied. LOLZ This has been a jaw-dropping chapter, *picks jaw from keyboard* seriously..this is like totally soap opera, drama/anguishness...awesome job girl! :D Thanks for all of the updates.

*note, on this review, I corrected a grammar, so its okay if you have spellcheck typos especially since you wrote this at night..that happens to me..lolz :D



Author's Response:

Ugh... Wanting to punch her.. Yea Allison has that bad effect on people. haha.. I don't like her very much either.  Haha about JC, go ahead and hug him! As long as i get equal time! :D Thanks very much for all the reviews! I'm glad i was able to bring on the drama in the story, but let's hope things get better. :)) Your reviews are what make me update, so thank you! :))

*Ah yes i noticed! Sorry! but yes, this late at night thing is't working.. haha I'll write more when i'm atleast 75% conscious during the day! lolz:D Thanks!




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2011 02:14 pm (Chapter 20- I'd Redo Everything In A Heartbeat)

OHHH! *grabs Kleenex tissues* :( THAT letter was soo touching and well written, man..that is just, I have no words to say. *tears. Sometimes a letter like that is better than confronting a person that you love. GREAT job on this chapter..thanks for the update..



Author's Response: Aww, glad you liked the letter he wrote her :) It's true what you said about using a letter as a way of communication as opposed to the actual confrontation. I use that method too.. Thanks for the sweet feedback! :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2011 01:59 pm (Chapter 19- There's A Sentence I Never Though I'd Hear)
Call him Liz, call him! *jumps up and down* Ok..from the top. Um..Im glad that JC woke up, so yay. I love that Chris is being such a smart aleck to him..tee hee, love him. And this Allison freak..hmm, why is she so nicey nice to JC all of a sudden?? I wonder..and now lets hope that the baby is kept on the downlow so the media doesnt find out, cause that would be something..lastly, Im glad that Emma and Liz put their arguments aside and are both fine. Thanks for the update.. *reads next chapter*

Author's Response: Thank you for the read & review! :))



Megan (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2011 01:13 am (Chapter 18- Would You Settle For A Text Message?)
OH-MY-GOD! My jaw is still on the floor....well that definitely throws a curveball into the story. Hmmmm this could get messy really fast! But on a good note, love that Liz is coming to her senses and realizing that JC did make a mistake but now with the whole 'pregnant' thing in there...woof dah. Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Whoo mission accomplished with the curveball thing then! haha Thank you very much Megan! :))



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Jun 29, 2011 03:51 pm (Chapter 18- Would You Settle For A Text Message?)
*Sigh* And just when I thought that everything was going to finally work out in JC's favor. OF COURSE Allison is pregnant. SUURREEE she is. *wink* The thing is, thought, that Liz's and Emma's friendship I liked a lot before but now I'm kind of annoyed by Emma. Sure, she's being a great friend trying to help but she shouldn't have given up on Liz that easily. At least, that's my opinion. I love the bromance the guys have. Chris dissing JC about his pants was great. Update again soon.

Author's Response: Well let's see how things go shall we.. haha :)) Thank you very much for the read and review. I always love to hear your opinion! Will update later this week, hopefully :)) I can't wait for you to read the rest!





You must login (register) to comment.