Comments For Barely Breathing
Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 01:41 pm (chapter 22)
What a good chapter...little shocked by the One Year Later part but everything was tied together in the end, now lets just hope she can get ahold of JC and things go well! Can't wait to read more =)



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 12:55 am (chapter 22)
agh! haha i had to comment again. i'm still in shock. one year later! i can't believe she let this go on for a YEAR! go get your happiness girl!



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 12:53 am (chapter 22)
oh em gee. haha when i first opened this chapter i almost screamed out loud "ONE YEAR LATER?!" but even though JC wasn't really in this chapter, i still liked it. i was happy that you were able to redeem caroline's relationship with brandon and that he's still helping to grow her into a better person as she works through things. and kevin! such a minor character but also refreshing in small ways since he doesn't seem so caught up in the hollywood life and still seems to genuinely care for Caroline. agh! can't wait to see how this ends!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 11, 2011 08:51 pm (chapter 22)

Yes she is! Go Caroline.. :D Awww Im sooo glad that Brandon showed up and gave her a little pep talk, that was real nice. I love that he was actually so understanding.. :) And JC was the one that helped his band got signed..that is real neat.

Now, to JC, wow he sold his house in LA, and moved to Fla..interesting..and I like how Kevin gave Caroline where JC's current residence is, so Caroline..go find him.. :D This is good..love it..Thanks for updating..




roseinvisible (Signed) on Aug 11, 2011 07:00 pm (chapter 22)
A;LKDSJFA; GREAT CHAPTER!



emme07 (Signed) on Aug 11, 2011 12:42 pm (chapter 22)

Great update!!! Totally on the edge of my seat over here!!!!!






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