Comments For Barely Breathing
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 08:07 pm (chapter 20)
*cries* Im sad...because JC fired her, and the argument that both Caroline and JC had was heartbreaking. However, angry JC is hot, they had some make out sessions huh? Yeah JC thats what you wanted lolz Hmm.. Man, I would like to know what happens next..this is good! Maybe some time off with her family will get her mind off of JC.. Im guessing the old saying is really true, "if you love someone so much, you have to let them go" So JC dear, is that what you did?? ANSWER ME..lolz Anywho..thanks for the updates.. ;D



shan030709 (Signed) on Aug 07, 2011 08:02 pm (chapter 20)

So, I just marathon read this story and I love it.  The characters are so reachable.  I sure hope JC and Caroline wise up soon!!

 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 11:11 am (chapter 20)
Okay, she has got to stop making assumptions based on what her mind wants to believe.   Being pissed over being fired, yeah...agree with that but when he said why finally out of anger and she said she wanted it...I thought finally, at least they are on the same page.  lol  Then, she wakes up and assumes he left her and had no intention of cominng back...well, mistake...and when she made her comments to him about how her leaving was what was best without even trying to find out why he wasn't in the bed when she should know how he is about his music...huge mistake...what was he suspposed to say to that...it looked like she was completely regretting it and at that point...she was sort of confirming his fears about why that shouldn't happen between them.  Oh, and she did NOT have sex with her boys, she was fired so maybe if she'd gotten that thought out of her head she would have looked at it differently.  Again, hard to be mad at JC for trying to protect himself from what it does seem to be she is doing.  I think everyone is going to be miffed at him without thinking about the fact that this one, was all her.  She decided to leave by telling him it was what was best without giving him a chance to say anything different and he did give her a reason why he wasn't in the bedroom.  Okay, getting long winded.  Sorry!  lol



MissM (Signed) on Aug 07, 2011 07:38 am (chapter 20)
Oooh, so cold. So callous. I'm angry FOR her! 



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 01:36 am (chapter 20)

thanks for updating!!!! omg. haha i feel like i can't breathe because i'm so tense from this chapter and waiting to see what will happen. i just want to shake caroline when she's leaving his house and say "you're scared too!! just as scared as he is. can't you see how terrified he is right now!?!"

wonderful writing! really can't wait to see where and how you take this story to its close. 






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