Comments For Barely Breathing
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 15, 2011 09:32 pm (chapter 5)

I LOVED THIS! Ok where do I start? Cause there were so many moments here..um oh! when Caroline arrived at JC's house and found Tyler..HA! And when JC took her apple..this line right here "Mariella's not here today.  JC, where did you get that apple? JC replied, "I found it."
Where did you find it?" In your lunch bag."
LMAO! He's such an adorkable guy, and I also liked when they were both at the supermarket, and when JC was giving her lectures about not eating meat..LOLZ! Now the last thing, was when HIS car broke down, and Caroline saying "she broke it" HAHA! You know..off topic, that happened to MY car, and I have a Tercel(old I know..but its a great little thing..lolz) Above all, GREAT job on this chapter, *bravo* :D






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