Comments For Barely Breathing
Tracy (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2012 10:04 am (cast)
I really really enjoyed reading this story! I love where you went with it and your characterization of both Caroline and JC was so consistent and well thought-out. I also love how JC is a bit of an asshole in this and how Caroline wasn't in love with him from the beginning. The progression of their relationship felt natural and that takes talent to pull off. That being said, I really do think you are a great writer. I would love to read more JC-centric stories from you! I truly love the way you characterize him. Hope to read more soon! 



autumn_wednesday (Anonymous) on May 22, 2012 02:25 pm (cast)
im only about 6 chapters in and im hooked, very well written, will defo read more of your stories



Keitta (Anonymous) on Aug 17, 2011 12:31 pm (cast)

Just read the whole story these past few days, I loved it from start to finish. I didn't want to stop reading it! Great Job!

 




grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 11:38 am (cast)
I like your cast!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 05, 2011 04:50 pm (cast)
I really love this story.  I would love to say that JC is being a jerk, but I can sort of understand why he is reacting the way he is.  He has feelings for her and stands to get hurt and nobody wants to be that rebound person, celebrity or not.  If she'd not been drinking when she had kissed him, it may have gone differently because he would've known for sure it was what she DID want and not something she was doing because she'd been drinking and brooding over Brandon.  Tyler warned her and she didn't listen.  lol  Now she is upset with him but she is forgetting up until this weekend, she hasn't exactly acted like he was someone she would want to build something with and jumping in his lap, tempting as it is, while drunk doesn't prove it either. 



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Apr 29, 2011 02:27 am (cast)
this is the first time i'm reviewing but i just wanted to let you know i'm loving this story and where it's heading! keep it up!





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