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Bobbilynn (Anonymous) on Aug 24, 2010 03:26 am (Chapter Four)
No, you should not make this end.  Moremoremoremoremore.  I plead :)



Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 02:36 am (Chapter Four)
That was so yummy!  And I love the use of the song, very creative.  I know Cheryl enjoyed this :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 17, 2010 09:05 pm (Chapter Four)

That was AMAZING! So that was dinner huh?? =P Pretty awesome! I also like this line "No baby, but I need dinner for the second round" Oh how hott! Thats what I would ask him..oh yes! Of course all of us ladies cant get enough of JC, we will always want more. ;)

Great job girl! I loved it! *claps*




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 17, 2010 08:58 pm (Chapter Three)
YES! Go for it! Woot Woot! This is REALLY good! lolz this line "Bed or Floor" well...I'll do it anywhere he wants..yes! Ok..moving on ahem.. :D



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 17, 2010 08:51 pm (Chapter Two)

Oohh! Yay! JC was having a moment in that pool scene! & she wants to join him for dinner?? Or hang out with him?? How lovely..off to read the next chapter! Woot!

Good job! :D




Calandra Stevens (Anonymous) on Aug 16, 2010 03:43 am (Prologue)
Great job! I uh..drools..okay then. JC. poolside. alone....MMMM YESSIR! lol continue continue continue



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 10:09 pm (Chapter Four)

August has been great for all of us! Yet again, you do a wonderful job. :)




MissM (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 10:08 pm (Chapter Four)
Son of a.... I.... uh... fuck, lady. I mean... eventually I will think of a full sentence.....later... wow. 



MissM (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 10:06 pm (Chapter Three)

I'm just gonna... next. 

 




azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 10:06 pm (Chapter Four)

you're evil.  What the hell does this mean?!?  "Or is it?"  ARG!!  holy crap.  I need to go to this resort.  Next time I feel like quitting, I'm going to do just that and go spend a week on the beach in Mexico, find me some hot piece of ass to help me spend my time!!  lol 




musicmel (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 10:05 pm (Chapter Two)

Well now... she is all about him :)

More more more.




azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 09:52 pm (Chapter Three)
so, uhm...ahem...I'm a freak.  LOL...who knew?!  ::shrugs::  :D

Author's Response: its the quiet ones, we should worry about!



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 09:40 pm (Chapter One)

Dirty Justin eyeing up the strangers...

I can be as strange as he needs me to be! lol



Author's Response: ummm...its not justin



azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 09:26 pm (Chapter Two)

::thud::

that was the sound of me hitting the floor.  I'm dead.  I'm speechless.  I NEED MORE!!!



Author's Response: uh....Cheryl? hun....r u ok?



MissM (Signed) on Aug 15, 2010 09:11 pm (Chapter Two)
I have a severe case of dry mouth right now. Don't let me down, mama. 

Author's Response: the pressure....I LOVE IT!





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