Woah.

So, I saw this in the recently updated section and had to see what it was about because I've got a story based on "Assassin" as well and wanted to see someone elses take on it. This is the kind of story that I would've written about it if I could actually write this kind of stuff. And even if I had, it wouldn't be anywhere close to how fantastic this is! I absolutely love the details that you show and the background that you've given in this first chapter. A lot of the history and interworkings remind me of the Sookie Stackhouse novels, but then again, there's only so many ways to write about vampire history. 

I LOVELOVELOVE this. So much! 

Ditto to the other reviews. I didn't want to stop reading. Great work!