Comments For Between The Lines
heartsevolve (Signed) on Jun 12, 2010 02:19 pm (Awaken)

I loved the way you explained what happened in the night with snapshots. It was very much like drunk mornings I have when I try to replay what happened the night before!

Can't wait for moooore!



Author's Response:

Waking up the morning after a good drunkfest is always the weirdest feeling. Esp if your waking up next to Justin Timberlake.. haha It's funny how thats exactly how you feel. You seem to have flashes of the night before the peices fall together.

 Thanks for reading and reviewing :)




heartsevolve (Signed) on Jun 12, 2010 01:54 pm (Shots)
Oh dang. I'm such a sucker for attheclubdancing!justin. So attractive, I can't stand it! But I was so surprised he stopped her in the cooler! Whyyy?

Author's Response:

Him stopping that moment in the cooler was wrong on so many levels, but he has a reason.

I love new readers :)

Thanks




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2010 07:12 am (First Date)
Ooooh girl that was absolutely fabulous!! I'm curious to find out what Janelle has to tell Mia. :-) ♥

Author's Response:

Janelle... well she has some interesting information.

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jun 04, 2010 03:46 pm (The End.)
bombass update my dear!! i hope things go up for the two of them. :-)

Author's Response:

Good things? What's that? hmmm... I will have to google that idea.

 

Thanks :) :)




shan030709 (Signed) on Jun 03, 2010 11:31 pm (The End.)
I feel for Malia, you have her going through some rough stuff.  Drama and I love it!!

Author's Response:

Malia is dealign with a lot, but sometimes you have to be burned before you can really love someone. Or attempt to love someone else.

I'm good for Drama! lol

thanks :)




azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 03, 2010 10:16 pm (The End.)

dude!  pass the box of tissues  *sniffle*  I feel bad for Malia, but I'm glad she finally told Justin what's going on.  I just hope Aaron doesn't cause TOO much drama!  lol.  Also, loved the idea she has about doing SexyBack.  Brilliant!  :)



Author's Response:

I forgot the tissue warning again. Aaron, well he is Aaron.

SexyBack was my brilliant Idea! I thought it would be interesting to see, only if I could actually make it happen.

 

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on May 29, 2010 12:08 am (Cover)
girl that was amazing!!! chapters like this...are just..yeaaaaa :-) and are you gonna be needing Kroll anytime soon? grr

Author's Response:

Kroll is always waiting as I post a chapter... he is needed at all times! And he will be need to be on top of his game soon.

 

Thanks :)




azchickadee (Signed) on May 27, 2010 10:48 pm (Cover)

k, first:  I LOVE that Evanescence song!  And I love how perfectly it fits the story :)  Second: why isn't she telling Justin the truth??  Put the damn boy out of his misery, Malia!  Good grief!  Third: not fair being interrupted.  So not fair!  lol

another awesome chapter :)



Author's Response:

First that song, I think everything about it is perfect. I love that the lyrics and the emotion of the lyrics shine brighter than the track behind the song does! I think that song does fit perfectly with Malia right now in her life. There's things she doesnt even know yet.

Malia needs to tell Justin. It will eat them both alive. And yea, Sam... HOW RUDE! (Total Stephanie Tanner moment)

Thanks :) I'm glad you are loving this!!!




azchickadee (Signed) on May 21, 2010 11:22 pm (Time Well Wasted)
finally!  lol...kinda fast, but a much needed release :) 

Author's Response:

Finally! Exhale breath. It was very fast, yet it felt like forever! While writing them it feels like they have known each other for years... or even months but its only been days.  Anyways there's a lot in store for these two, I hope you stick around. Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on May 21, 2010 10:08 pm (Time Well Wasted)
wow...just wow :-) we need more hot and steamy chapters like this one :-) keep it up love!!

Author's Response:

Hot and Steamy ;) Not usually my cup of tea to write, just read but it was needed... Remember this event.

  Thanks :)




azchickadee (Signed) on May 19, 2010 07:24 pm (Lines)

douchebag.  I'm voting him off the island.  Right now.  But I have a feeling he's not going away.  He's going to caus a hell of a lot more drama isn't he?  sigh....

oh, and uhm...I'm not so happy about the fact that everything with Justin the night before was conveniently skipped over.  lol...great update :)



Author's Response:

I have a list of things that Aaron is and Douchebag may very well be at the top of that list. Aaron seemed to be a bit of a dramaqueen... we'll see what he brings!

Oh, yea... the night before... You will get the details very soon, I promise. I have been working on that section nonstop for days trying to make it semi-perfect! lol (I think I have the OCD, lol)

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on May 19, 2010 03:07 pm (Lines)
what a f*cking ass Aaron is..have Kroll beat his ass for me will ya? fantabulous update my dear :-)

Author's Response:

Aaron is a fucking ass... I would send Kroll but he isn't worth it. I'm ready to blow this story wide open, I hope you are ready!

Thanks ;)




JoJo (Anonymous) on May 18, 2010 12:40 am (More Shots)
Evil!! You would end it there! If this really does go down this way I think it's going to cause some problems. Especially if Justin freaks out because he still thinks she's with Aaron! Great update! Update ASAP please!!

Author's Response:

Sorry! There was a huge decsion to amke and I couldnt make it at that moment. It give me some time!

Justin has already freaked out and they havent done anything yet... it could be intertesting.

 

Thanks ;)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on May 17, 2010 01:38 am (More Shots)
*shakes head* evil evil evil..but i love you :-) very nicely done!!

Author's Response:

Evil? I'm not evil... I just love to leave you hanging... Mahahahaha

Thanks :)




mzmillion (Signed) on May 16, 2010 01:16 pm (More Shots)
more please!!!!

Author's Response: I promise, there will be more... soon!





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