Comments For Between The Lines
mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 24, 2010 02:40 pm (Go Away)
I must admit, I love this story but Malia's whining is starting to irratate me, she wants everything but nothing all at once... its annoying because Justin's all sweet and caring....lol. More please, please please.

Author's Response:

Malia is one of those scared, confused and broken people that clearly just doesn’t know what she wants in life. She knows she needs Justin’s help, but that doesn’t make her want to take his help. Maybe it’s a level of pride… we’ll see :)

Thanks




JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 23, 2010 10:32 pm (Go Away)
I feel better knowing that Justin didn't intend to make her feel abandoned. She is totally broken and I really hope she allows Justin to help her in some way. This is a step forward. Great update! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

She really is totally broken.  She simply needs to let Justin help her, but she seems to not be able to do that. Grr!! Lol Thanks for reading & reviewing :)




shan030709 (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 09:33 pm (Go Away)

You left me speechless.  Obviously Malia is broken and Justin just wants to help.  I sure hoep things start to turn around.  Cannot wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Wow, I don’t know what to say to the word ‘speechless.’ Malia is broken. Really broken.  Hopefully she pulls herself together :) Thanks for reading, reviewing and enjoying this!!!




jersey_tenn (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 05:25 pm (Go Away)

I don't know how you do it, but you heal my heart. You heal my wounds. This brushes the salt from the wound, and tells me that we'll be ok. We're all broken, some with smooth edges and others with sharp, jagged edges. Justin is Malia's healer. Someone in life helped him put the pieces back together, and showed him how to heal. Now, he is there to lead Malia. To light her path of darkness. Its not to say that their love will survive, but their friendship will.

Friendship often ends in love; but love in friendship -- never.

It's the hardest of life's lessons that we must all learn - yesterday, today, or tomorrow. We cannot hide.

Malia, eventually, she would've cried enough and hurt enough. She would've realized that she is the master of her fate and the captain of her soul. But, we are not destined to walk these streets alone. No matter the stubbornness, we are a codependent species. We depend on others to make us independent.

Bravo, ma'am! Good luck on your finals.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I can heal your heart because I sure can't heal my own. I had to listen to an hour long rant with my best friend today that I don't trust anyone... blah blah blah. I think I need to find Justin and he can be my healer!

Friendship often ends in love; but love in friendship -- never. < This is sooo true.

Thanks  for the amazing review.  Thank ya thank ya thank ya!




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Aug 11, 2010 10:30 pm (The AfterEffect)
I do love this!! I do! I do! I do! but WHAT is mr. Jt up to? Better not be up to no good...naughty naughty Mel!!  ♥

Author's Response:

Me? Naughty? Ha, never ;)

JT better come out of the woodwork!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 03, 2010 01:02 am (The AfterEffect)
I really hope Justin has a really good reason for being M.I.A. right now. Malia is dealing with this by herself right now and it really sucks for her. Can't wait to see what's going to happen from here. Update again soon please!!!

Author's Response:

Justin BETTER have a good reason, I agree. Malia seems to be falling apart more and more...

 

Thanks :)




shan030709 (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 11:43 pm (The AfterEffect)

Really???  Really???  You just had too!!

 :Throwing Shoe:  

 I really like the story and hope that Justin is not being an ass like me seems to be doing right now!!  Hurry up and fix it please!!!



Author's Response:

I had to. I'm sorry. There's plenty more (stone throwing) chapters to come :)

Justin is... well I can't go there yet.

 

Thanks :)




AmberW (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 01:33 pm (The AfterEffect)

I don't think I ever returned him...my bad :)

Girl, I want to know what Justin is doing being a butt head like this!



Author's Response:

I don't think you ever returned him either. He was needed for this chapter that's for shure. ShadyJustin is not a nice guy.

I think he deserves spanked. I will handle that, don't worry ;)

Thanks :)




jersey_tenn (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 10:08 am (The AfterEffect)

i took Kroll....for ransom!!!! Bwa ha ha ha!

eeek......more! more! more!

wait, is this payback?!?! is this karma?!?! no!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Karma is a Bitch... wait I'm the bitch. It fits perfectly!!

 

 




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2010 05:29 pm (The Statement)
girll I love thiss.....you can't keep me waiting like this!! lol I'm playing. can't wait for the next updateeeee

Author's Response:

EEK! I'm a slacker I know! lol I have two chapters done however I need to find out who has Kroll before the next update... I may need him ;)

 Thanks Darlin. I promise an update will come very soon.




azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 21, 2010 07:28 pm (The Statement)
wow...so, I know I've been a slacker lately with the reviews, forgive me.  This chapter is so sad.  I want to nut punch Aaron for that stupid song he released.  And where the hell is Justin?  Why won't he answer his phone?  Malia, needs to stop being so dramatic!  lol...she knows she did the right thing by leaving Aaron, why is she second guessing herself?

Author's Response:

Slacker! It's all good, you're back!

Malia's entire thought process and the way she is feeling is sad. It's the weirdest feeling when I open the file of this story and as I start to write, I suddenly get this almost depression feeling wave over me. Almost as if I just step into her shoes and feel her pain.

I can't wait to *finally* let this story start to unravel. I have been telling the back-story for the last fifteen or so chapters.

Thanks :)




megzor (Signed) on Jul 15, 2010 09:50 pm (The Morning After)
boo! i had a feeling that would happen with aaron.. is he like the chris brown to rhianna?

Author's Response:

He may be Chris Brown... but Malia is no Rhianna.

As much as like like writing him, I hate him. Which is why I think he is the minimal character that Aaron is in the story, I didn't think he as a person derserved much face time. He just has a huge impact on her life.

Thanks :)




mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 14, 2010 07:51 pm (The Morning After)
more more more

Author's Response:

I'm typing away, I promise. (Totally avoiding a 4 page paper due for class because I can't get this story out of my head...)

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2010 07:46 am (The Morning After)
GAHHHH!!! I hope things get sorted and *ahem* Mrs. Malia pulls her head out of her butt! :-) loved ittttttttttttttt

Author's Response:

Malia is... well I think she is a little confused or simply just trying to figure everything out. It's hard to tell just yet. We will find out as the next few chapters start to unfold.

Thanks darlin :)




shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 13, 2010 10:54 pm (The Morning After)
Oh Crap!!  This is going to be interesting!!

Author's Response:

Oh crap is correct! It's going to be interesting to see how things unfold, how she handles it, and how Justin handles it.

Thanks :)






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