Comments For Kidnapped
EvilAngelBrandi (Signed) on Sep 17, 2010 10:09 pm (Chapter 46)

“Hey, before you guys run off… a little people please?” Kim asked trying to get out from under JC.  She was trying to be careful about it, not that she could have woken him up if she wanted too, but she didn’t want him to get hurt in the process.  (I'm guessing that you meant help.)

“What is wrong, honey?  You have been awfully quiet tonight.” JC finally asked.  His eyes appeared heavy as he spoke to her.  Kim just smiled, it wasn’t odd for her to be quiet, maybe she had been a little more talkative around him at least she was, until Brandi’s comments earlier regarding the guy being in some psychological trace or something like that. (I think you mean trance...)

(Oh, and the first sentence, the name's Brandi not Brand... Lol!) 

I can't believe it's almost over... Time for work on #2... :-) 

~B



Author's Response:

Yes, I think there is only 1 or 2 more chapters!  I already have Ideas for Kidnapped 2!  I need to get them all together so I can find them when I need them.  I hope to wrap this all up soon.

 

I made those changes on my master files, I'll get the posted story updated soon - thanks for the edits.






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