Comments For Kidnapped
EvilAngelBrandi (Signed) on Mar 10, 2010 06:15 pm (Chapter 19)
I don’t normally do this kind of stuff.”  Chris explained.

            “What get kidnapped and then seduced in a bathroom?” Brandi joked.  She could tell that Chris was struggling to find his words, though she could tell if it was nerves or if he was trying to lie to her.

            “Well the being kidnapped is a new experience for me, but I have to say it does seem to have some perks.  What I meant was I don’t have meaningless sex with random women.” Chris said.

That kinda makes it sound like he's saying that what happened between them was "meaningless" since he said he doesn't "normally do this kind of stuff" and then goes on with he doesn't "have meaningless sex with random women".... In my mind, I was ready for Brandi to ask if if that was all she was... Just meaningless sex... Brandi does have some SERIOUS trust issues when it come to guys based on her past relationships, you know... She's gonna be expecting the worst to happen... (Of course, those are just my thoughts about it though... :-) )



Author's Response:

your thoughts are important to me!  I don't want all my charatoers to seem a like.  using other people as 'models' is helpful.  and You are right Brandi should have a more apparent trust issues - that makes it interesting and Chris did try to pull a fast one on her already.  will have to edit this a little.




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 07, 2010 11:21 pm (Chapter 19)
I'm glad that Chris told her what he was feeling, I just hope that he wasn't just saying that as a way to try and escape. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: yes, well wait and see... hehe





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