"In one swift motion he dropped his hands and forced himself between her legs so that he could kiss her." Not sure if I'm the only one but (being me), when reading this part, my mind went a completely different place.... Like he was pushing Katy's legs apart to kiss her there... Lol! Not on the lips on her face... :-) It may have just been me but, knowing my mind & yours, my mind went straight for the deep part of the gutter. Other than that, I thought it was really good! Your stories are always awesome, hun. You should realize that by now. You've obviously got some devoted fans on this site already waiting (like I am) for you to post more. :-) Keep it up! ~B