Comments For Lost Soul
ninabina (Signed) on Sep 06, 2009 02:39 pm (Come Clean)

what was on the paper!?

 and prostitutes, JC?  god...surely you could find some chick to do you for free if you're that famous! 

 I need to know what was on the paper! lol. 




goodies54 (Anonymous) on Aug 31, 2007 07:08 am (Come Clean)
dang i wonder what secrets he has and isnt tellin anyone yet

Author's Response: oh man they all are hiding so much... next chapter is gonna get into it a little bit. lol im writing it now and im like damn, lol im twisted for thinkin up this stuff.



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 11:29 pm (Come Clean)
hmmm getting to the nitty gritty i see jc is def. trying to hide something i hope nothing bad happens to paige for snooping

Author's Response: he def is hiding something... even justin is. the next chapter is in the works and its going to reveal a lot and string a lot of loose strings together. thanks marina!



alimera (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:05 pm (Come Clean)
oh wow, i wonder what is in that paper that JC gave to her?? i'm intrigued--update again soon!

Author's Response: thank you for the review! that paper is definitely going to be a big piece of evidence. I'm currently writing the next update... it should be up sometime this week. Thanks for sticking with me!



Mariah (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 12:43 pm (Come Clean)
Oh man! That was so good. You know how I feel about this story. People are lovin it for reason. LOL JC thought they were whores that was cute. We all know I'd be in their place fo free. Yes, that's how I work. :p Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of the report. Everything is flowin nice girl. YOU'RE GOOD, get over it. :*

Author's Response: lmao seriously, if i were Paige, i'd be like... "Lorena... ok you can leave now... JC and I have some business to take care of." lmao. I'm glad you liked it girl... I already started the new chapter... the juices are flowing. lol.



aria (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 12:12 pm (Come Clean)
Awesome chapter. I don't know which guy to believe... it's so hard to distinguish who is telling the truth here. I can't wait to find out what's on that sheet of paper.

Author's Response: It's sad that the boys need eachother so much and things are just extremely messed up for the both of them.  And That paper could be anything... you're just going to have to see. Thanks for reviewing!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:23 am (Come Clean)
Fantastic! more soon. poor justin. poor jc. can't wait to find out the truth! :)

Author's Response: thank you! im definitely trying to knock out the updates as fast as possible.





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