Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2010 05:20 pm (Gravity)
gahhhh!!! can I just say that I love you???? and I LOVED the ending on this chapter... I hope things continue to go up for both of the.:-)


musicmel (Signed) on Jul 21, 2010 09:25 am (Gravity)
I think I miss you.-Ugh. That melted my heart. Because of everything she could have said to him… she was just, honest. Those measly four little words can change someone’s life.Such a great update! You had me with the dream thing. I swear I went back three times and was like did I miss something? Is this really happening? If only I would have kept reading, I would have realized it was a dream. You made it feel like it was really happening in their lives. Those kind of dreams are creepy to have. I could swear up and down that it was real.


AmberW (Signed) on Jul 21, 2010 12:23 am (Gravity)

First of all, it's about freaking time you posted again! LOL On that note, can I be your beta reader so that I can read at least a day or two earlier?? LOL

Secondly-holy cow!  First the call from Lynn, then the dream and the "I think I miss you text".  I'm so glad she misses him!  I want to know if they get back together or what!

Great job!



Author's Response: you already are my beta, I bounce lots of ideas off you and you get to read small passages. If I actually had chapters ready a day before I was going to post, I'd let you read them. But since I don't...you'll have to settle for the former :)


jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 20, 2010 10:48 pm (Gravity)

ha! madi  buckled! its about time she quit tryin to be all strong and mighty, but good for Justin. He was at his lowest, and now he's back! whoo!

her text is just heartbreaking tho....damn breakups



Author's Response:

Seriously...breakups suck :( Even a few years down the road they still come back to haunt you.

Yes. Madison had to buckle at one point or another. I don't thinnk anyone could be immune to that man no matter how strong a person you are. 

Glad you liked it, my love <3



azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 20, 2010 10:16 pm (Gravity)
LOVE the dream sequence.  I think you could totally put it up as a one-shot for the challenge.  Start at when she is going to bed though, leaving out all the story stuff that would confuse people if they haven't been following the story.  But...why wouldn't they be following this story?  Right?  Because it's awesome!  lol :)  I really liked having this chapter mostly in Madi's perspective.  I'm the kind of person that likes to know what's going on in each of the character's heads and this gives a good insight into what she's thinking and feeling since running in to Justin again.  Except.....it would have been better if you'd put in my suggestion of having her yell out Justin's name in the middle of sex.  hahaha!  oh well...maybe next time :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, I liked having the insight into Madi's head but this story isn't really about her. It's about Justin's journey to find his way back...no matter where that is. :) But I'm glad that you got to see where she's coming from a little bit.

I like the idea of posting in the challenge from where she gets into bed. I still say we need more people to enter. lol. I am NOT going up against you. I'll get squashed. haha. And I do agree, they should be following this story. lol. I love these two. Even the dream version of these two. 

Anyway...thank youuuuuuuu for the review! You know I love your reviews! :) 

And PS...no Skyler/Madi sex. The Skyler in my head may be hot as hell, but he's no Justin. And I don't want to write any Madi smut that doesn't involve Justin. haha.





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