Ok... My heart is officially broken. Justin makes me sad.

I'm trusting you... if you don't come through I will sick my sword man after you.

ok, are you ready for this?  lol...here we go....

I LOVE YOU!  I know I told you earlier, but I just want to reiterate the fact that I love you and I think you are a FANTASTIC author, and it's not just because you write about the boy I love so much!  You could write a story about anything and I would read it and love it :)  It's so hard to find a well written fanfiction story that isn't just full of smut (not that there's anything wrong with smut, and when Justin finally pulls his head out of his ass and gets his shit together I expect for there to be some pretty hot and heavy scenes between him and Madi...it's just sometimes, I want more than just the sex, ya know?).

Okay, now on to the actual review :) 

#1. Sad Justin makes me sad.  He's seriously breaking my heart and I think it would be a really good idea for him to go talk to someone.  Even if it's just once.  I think he needs to get a lot of stuff off his chest and gain some perspective on things.

#2. You have me curious.  "When he [JC] knocked on my door, I realized that I didn't have a choice. Besides, he'd seen me in worse shape than I was now."  My immediate thoughts was: really?  when? or was this just in reference to a few weeks ago when Justin and JC finally reconnected?

#3. "When I closed the door after he left I let out a huge sigh of relief and slumped against it. I was exhausted. Physically, mentally, emotionally...I just needed to shut down for a few days." My reaction: No. What he needs to do is stop being a baby. He's pouting around like a spoiled child. He needs to grow a pair, stop moping around, and be the man we all know (or wish we did) and love. He wants things to change? Then change them Justin!  Running away isn't going to help anything!1 (Okay, rant over)

#4. Part of the reason I love you is for the humor you sprinkle in among all the sadness and heartbreak.  "All I could do was stare at her in amazement. 'You're outta this world, Madi.' 'Except I'm not green, right?' She interjected."  ahahahahaha!!!

#5. That little teaser of him and Madi before was just plain mean.  lol...I know he's got a lot of growing to do and he needs to figure out a lot of stuff right now, but damnit, is there anyway we can speed this process on a little bit....or maybe, you can put in another snippet or two?? 

Uhm....I think that is all.  Yep.  That's all I wanted to say.  Love ya!  And can't wait for the next chapter :)