Ok so Justin is totally breaking my heart. Ugh I wanted to burst into tears for him. Just when he was ready and everything was falling into place the world gives him a loop. Hopefully he learns from this and doesnt slide back into depression.
Author's Response: i shed a few tears writing that chapter. i felt so bad for him. but at the same time i had to give it to Madison for not just crumbling and coming back. She's an independent and strong chick. There was a reason she left in the first place and how Justin is right now--he's not someone that's ready for a relationship. i think madi realizes that.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, love!
you're right about that. JC and his mom both felt like Madison would probably drop the guy if Justin came around so they didn't view it as a problem. Whether or not that's actually true remains to be seen ;)
thanks again!
<3LT
Author's Response:
seriously...the poor piano :( But him taking his aggression out on something that he loved seemed natural. So I went with it.
That chapter hurt though. lol.
Thank you for the review love!
~LT
Author's Response:
ahhh. I'm sorry if it made you get tear-y!!!! :(
But I'm glad that you liked the chapter! It kinda broke my heart to write it. I want them to be together and happy as much as my reader's do. lol.
Thanks for the review, love!
~LT
see...told you I'd review as soon as I got home! Although...I'm kind of sad someone didn't beat me to the punch. I was planning what I was going to say in my two reviews....lol....
okay, let's get down to business:
I grimaced at the mention of what I assumed to be her new boyfriend's name. Whose name was Skylar anyway? It was such a dumb name.
You literally took the words right out of my mouth with this one. lol...as soon as "Skylar" was mentioned I was like, "Skylar?! Are you kidding me? *cougg-gay-cough*
Although my heart is breaking for Justin I LOVED his reaction when he got home to Madison being in a relationship. I've always pictured him as having a short temper (maybe because that's how we ALL write him! lol) and the way you wrote his temper tantrum was SO easy to picture. And when he looked at the piano I was like, "NO! Not the piano!" And then he cried :( and I wanted to give him a hug....after I slapped him upside the head for being such a jerk and a douchebag and letting Madison walk away in the first place.
I was surprised that she showed up at his house. That took some guts! And I'm glad she's being honest with him and is going to make this hard for him. It should be hard. After what he did I would have been disappointed if she had just let him off easy. He needs to sweat a bit and decide whether or not he's really ready and willing to fight for her. And then he needs to fight for her! Damn it! He needs to get his confidence back and then woo the socks (or panties...whichever may be the case) of her and win her back!! :)
Basically, I loved it. As usual! And I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
as much as I'd love it if she did just make it easy on him...I can't do it. It's too predictable. Originally she was going to be all supportive and by his side but...I think he needs to do it for himself. He needs to grow up a bit. So glad that you love my story. I'm fairly attached to it too. :)
Thanks for the review love!
~LT
