NOOOOO!!!!!!!
They are both so in love with each other!
Btw I always love when a man wipes the tears away from a woman's face.... so cute!
*death glare*
as one of my readers always tells me, "you and your damn cliffhangers!!" lol...two in a row? seriously?? guh!!
ok...what did I think? uhm...loved it! I love how I am able to so perfectly imagine Justin in my head as I'm reading. You've done a fantastic job capturing his character and the way you write is very expressive. Bravo! *claps* Uhm...I loved the whole grocery store run in...thought it was perfect! And yes, I was kind of waiting for Madison to drop a bombshell like this! lol...question is, is it really serious? Or is Justin going to be able to seduce her away?? (lol....I think he'd be able to seduce anyone away from anyone if he really wanted to, let's be honest! am I right??)
I hope you're writing the next chapter, cuz I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job! :)
Author's Response:
hahahaha. you'll have to wait and see how serious it is. but I do know that if i were with a man, all Justin would have to do is settle those damn eyes of his on me and I'd leave whoever I was with. Madison seems to have a mind of her own at the moment so I really don't know what she's going to do. We got in a serious argument last night when I was writing this. Because she up and decided oh hey, I'm going to have a boyfriend. And I'm like SERIOUSLY??? You just complicated things! And I tried to get around it but she just had to have her way. So now I have to figure out how to change things back to what I wanted them to be. Oh well, just makes more of a plot twist. I'm ok with that. It was slightly predictable. haha. Glad you liked it!