O.M.G! Eternally grateful that you put Aaliyah in this story! Was so shocked when I read that babygirl was the mysterious friend; that was a great moment for me.
So it took Chris verbally knocking some sense into Joshua for him to see his wrongdoing? I'm glad it happened but something about that scares me for their future. He better start paying attention and quick! I'm glad Myra's in town and I think the advice she got was good. She needs to focus on herself and her friends and family and let him do the work. She deserves the time and energy she gives out returned to her. Good chapter mama!
booo!!! why is JC being such a douche?! It's Tara. I hate her. She needs to leave. Can we vote her off the island and throw her to the sharks? That would be fantastic!
awesome update :)
Fuck him and his couch...dirty bastard! I can't believe his all oblivious and nonchalant about the shit HE set into motion. Then have the audacity to act shocked and surprised when she leaves?! He can go to hell for all I care...or at least until the next update. You put your foot on this one mama....too good!
P.S-Homemade Peach Ice Cream is the ish!
Author's Response:
As outsiders looking in, I think we all feel the same. Just like Justin and Chris. But, as an insider looking out, like Ana, will she feel the same?
Next update will definitely be a lot sooner than I anticipated. I'm on a roll with this one, and my goal is to finish it before my one year mark. So, stay tuned mama! Thank you!
S/N: it really is the ish! lol...
JC is so yummy!! That's the kind of relationship we as fans hope to have with him or at least it's how we imagine him to be. Her relationship with the guys is cute too. I love how protective they are of her and I hope that continue. Chapter 14 was epic! I don't know what the fuck possessed JC to bring that hoochie around but I hope she's handled real quick. I was waiting for the drama and you certainly didn't disappoint. Awesomeness so far mama!
P.S- I'd love to hear more from her sisters. :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you were able to read through it and catch up! Eek, this excites me too much! lol. I'm glad that their relationship comes off as so free-flowing and natural. it's exactly what I shot for - hence, the title. But, sometimes, I worry that I may try too hard and make it forceds. Ana is my baby. I've poured so much soul in her characterization, and it makes me happy beyond words to hear you describe her. Because it is everything that I want her to be. Thank you!
JC is oh-so-yummy! And you're so right about this is what we all envision, at least for a while. We all know that man is married to his music, and that's that. CH 14 was epic. It took me many pairs of panties to write that one -- lol!
We've all questioned many JC decisions, like bringing that hoochie around. Yep, will always question that. She'll eventually be handled - lol.
The sisters are coming -- in a hurry too! So, stay tuned...
Thank you for the love mama!
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You and I have talked so you know my thoughts on this, but yes, Ana is just beginning to show that she's not stupid. She may be young and green, but she is not stupid. 1) Amen. 2) Amen. lol
Author's Response: Exactly....no one understood that thing that had going on. And personally, I don't care how horny or freaky someone is, there is a line. There is a limit. And, frankly, she doesn't even rank of out-of-limit-possibilities!
Author's Response: Exactly....no one understood that thing that had going on. And personally, I don't care how horny or freaky someone is, there is a line. There is a limit. And, frankly, she doesn't even rank of out-of-limit-possibilities!
Author's Response: Did we all not wonder what the hell he was thinking being with her?!?! I couldn't leave her out of this...if you hate her now, hold on tight!
Author's Response: Hey woman! I gave you your pool boy -- did I not? eh? eh? of course I did! A pool boy and SO MUCH MORE! lol...thanks for the love!
Author's Response:
Anger is passionate. Passion is love. Is it not?
Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Vocally, in my head, JC and Ana are equals. They can blow the top off anything. So, I just had to do it. Thank you ma'am!
Author's Response: True, true, true. When you aren't jealous, it means you don't care. At least to me it does. Thanks babes!
“They aren’t kissing! They’re eating each other!” Joey exclaimed.
Love, love, LOVED that line. You make Joey so hilarious in this story. Hahaha, they're so confused. Love it. But you all ready knew that =D
Author's Response: Joey has so many great quotes in this story. He's like my comedic relief. Thanks hun!
Author's Response: Chris is always looking to trick someone, and I realized that someone needs to get him too. Ana's a kid, and so is Chris, just 10 years older. lol. thanks!
Author's Response: Animals just bring out the kid in us all. It's inevitable! Thanks hun!
