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Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 08, 2010 07:33 am (Chapter 24: Knight in shining armor...)
Good chapter mama!  I need to see a little more effort on Josh's part before I'm on his side again.  Who are we kidding??  I'd be down with him through whatever, as will you. :)  Again, I enjoyed the chapter and I'm so glad one of her sisters was around for this one.  Their exchange is classic.  Loved it! :)



Mack (Anonymous) on Dec 07, 2010 09:01 pm (Chapter 24: Knight in shining armor...)

“I don’t know why you even bother making it straight. A little water, and poof! You’re Justin."

My all time favorite line. You sure know how to make a girl giggle. I loved the whole thing. FINALLY JC admits that he was an ass. Why are boys so blind sometimes. I loved how raw yet real the emotions were, I wanted to cry for them and then give them a hug when things went right. Also, Ana and Myra crack me up, remind me of my sisters actually. Great job, hun!






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