Comments For Naturally
Mack (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2010 02:40 pm (Chapter 22: Shoulda Been You...)
1) I love her Godfather. He's awesome in a very protective way. 2) I loved Justin so much in this chapter. I wanted to give him a giant hug, he was so sweet. 3) This line alone almost made me cry: Once under the spray of the showerhead, she lost her battle. The salty tears raced down her face, mixing with the hot water that poured above her head. Should've reviewed this earlier. I know I suck, but I'm makin' up for it. Great job!


azchickadee (Signed) on Oct 31, 2010 02:39 pm (Chapter 22: Shoulda Been You...)

booo!!!  why is JC being such a douche?!  It's Tara.  I hate her.  She needs to leave.  Can we vote her off the island and throw her to the sharks?  That would be fantastic! 

awesome update :)



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 30, 2010 12:51 am (Chapter 22: Shoulda Been You...)

Fuck him and his couch...dirty bastard!  I can't believe his all oblivious and nonchalant about the shit HE set into motion. Then have the audacity to act shocked and surprised when she leaves?!  He can go to hell for all I care...or at least until the next update.  You put your foot on this one mama....too good!

P.S-Homemade Peach Ice Cream is the ish! 



Author's Response:

As outsiders looking in, I think we all feel the same. Just like Justin and Chris. But, as an insider looking out, like Ana, will she feel the same?

Next update will definitely be a lot sooner than I anticipated. I'm on a roll with this one, and my goal is to finish it before my one year mark. So, stay tuned mama! Thank you!

S/N: it really is the ish! lol...





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