Comments For Naturally
Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 27, 2010 11:16 pm (Chapter 21: Hanging...)
Mayra, this is an absolutely wonderful story! The relationship between the two is truly free-flowing and natural and I for one really appreciate that. Ana is strong, independent, and good natured but she doesnt hide her vulnerability and I admire that.

JC is so yummy!! That's the kind of relationship we as fans hope to have with him or at least it's how we imagine him to be. Her relationship with the guys is cute too. I love how protective they are of her and I hope that continue. Chapter 14 was epic! I don't know what the fuck possessed JC to bring that hoochie around but I hope she's handled real quick. I was waiting for the drama and you certainly didn't disappoint. Awesomeness so far mama!

P.S- I'd love to hear more from her sisters. :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you were able to read through it and catch up! Eek, this excites me too much! lol. I'm glad that their relationship comes off as so free-flowing and natural. it's exactly what I shot for - hence, the title. But, sometimes, I worry that I may try too hard and make it forceds. Ana is my baby. I've poured so much soul in her characterization, and it makes me happy beyond words to hear you describe her. Because it is everything that I want her to be. Thank you!

JC is oh-so-yummy! And you're so right about this is what we all envision, at least for a while. We all know that man is married to his music, and that's that. CH 14 was epic. It took me many pairs of panties to write that one -- lol!

We've all questioned many JC decisions, like bringing that hoochie around. Yep, will always question that. She'll eventually be handled - lol.

The sisters are coming -- in a hurry too! So, stay tuned...

Thank you for the love mama!




Mack (Anonymous) on Oct 23, 2010 06:10 pm (Chapter 21: Hanging...)
I loved this chapter becasue Ana is a smart girl and actually knows that whatever is going on between her and JC stays there instead of blabbing to the others. Ok, two things. 1) Tara's an annoying bitch and 2) JC's and annoying ick. Really? Is he THAT blind? He better make up for it...UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response:

You and I have talked so you know my thoughts on this, but yes, Ana is just beginning to show that she's not stupid. She may be young and green, but she is not stupid. 1) Amen. 2) Amen. lol






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