omg.  best thing ever.  love, love, loved it!!  I am amazed everytime you write a chapter at how you are able to switch between Justin and Taylor so smoothly.  (Actually, truth be told, I'm slightly jealous that you have that much control and are so in tune with your characters!  Teach me your ways, oh wise one.....lol)

okay, specific thoughts:

#1. "I like your lips...don't be too hard on them."  guh! Totally swallowed my gum.  Or I would have if I had been chewing gum!  lol...damn that boy is smoother than butter sometimes and I wonder if he realizes what he's doing or if it just comes out and that's just the way he is.  Sigh...

#2. "I spot Justin in a pair of khaki cargo shorts, a black polo on top, and his natural brown curls tucked underneath a William Rast logo baseball cap."  There are SO many good things in that sentence, where the hell do I begin??  lol...I love that he's got some curls in this story.  Not too many (don't really want the fro to come back) but just enough where there's enough to run my fingers through it...or I mean for Taylor to run her fingers through it....also, that whole outfit he's got on?  Yes please!  Can I order one of him to go?? :)

#3. "Don't you trust me?"  Oh, such a dangerous question coming from that man...

#4. Loved the interview scene but Justin's answers were cracking me up.  Can you say vague much?  He's gotten so good at evading questions about another solo album that none of us are going to believe him when he actually does put one out!  lol

#5. My heart is breaking for him over whatever it is that happened with Jessica but I'm glad that Taylor is there for him :)  and the way you ended the chapter was beautiful: trust is built rather than given.  So true!  And these two are definitely building a good foundation.  Can't wait to see what happens next!!  Eeek!!  :)