Comments For Alternative To Love
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 29, 2009 01:29 am (Chapter 15)
You know as I was reading this I was like "wow...for the first time she's actually enjoying sex." That was seriously amazing and it was like a light bulb went off in my head. Everything, including when she would have sex, is connected to her past. Talk about mental control huh? It's so sad and I hate that for her. I'm wondering how she will feel when she wakes up. She definitely has a emotional connection to him now more than ever. I know that thing is not pressing charges! They would have to be absolutely crazy to even find justin at fault after learning about what that pile of crap did to jordan! Ugh! The nerve of him to even try to play the victim! What happened to jordan has a good chance of coming to light with this event though. The public will press even more for info on her background. And justin...man. He has definitely dug himself in even deeper. Who knows how he'll get out...or when he will change and stop fighting. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

You're right about her mental control, and it's the first time anyone has gotten under her skin enough for her to feel secure enough to be herself.

And of course he's pressing charges! After all these years he knows she'll do what she can to hide her past, and if he has a chance to make some serious money...? Justin is in it deep, and continues to take the wrong choices. Hopefully he'll get his head together soon... 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 28, 2009 07:29 pm (Chapter 15)

I need an update badly; I hope that he didn't use her, and that Jessica does find out and that he is honest and tells her he has feelings for her.  I also hope that Jordan steps in and tells the world the truth why Justin did what he did to protect her.  I hope that they are honest with each other and get together.

I need an update fast PLEASE!



Author's Response: LOL, I can tell you some of your 'hopes' are right, but most of them... Well, you'll see:)



Joanne (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2009 07:54 pm (Chapter 15)
I love this story please don't make us wait too long for anothe update PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thank you! Took some time to update since I went on holiday, but next chapter will be up any minute



Tina (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2009 02:42 am (Chapter 15)
her dad should be shot.

Author's Response: LOL! Totally agree! Except that would be too easy for him. He should suffer first.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2009 01:21 am (Chapter 15)
Wow...everything is a big mess. I still don't feel bad that Justin punched the guy. He's a creep but I do feel bad about the mess it created. I hope everything gets straightened out. And I don't know how I feel about them having sex. I'm not sure it was the right time with all the emotion raging. We'll have to see how it turns out. Loved it! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

It definitly wasn't the right time, but they both needed it, and didn't think about consequences...

And, yes, her father definitly deserved the beating, but the aftermath may be a little difficult to deal with.

Stay tuned:-)






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