Comments For Alternative To Love
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 12, 2009 10:19 pm (Chapter 13)
So I just kind of skimmed through the last part. It's obviously hard to read. But I hate that that's what jordan went through as a child. I know we don't have the complete story, but that alone explains a lot really. I hope lynn is a big help and can get jordan to talk about what happened. Justin...he seems all talk right now. Like I understand he cares for jordan and the baby, but is he going to hold resentment against jordan for what has happened to her? For the lack of family she has? For her crazy "father"? I know he may not be able to deal with everything cause this is heavy stuff, and obviously he only dates people with easy lives, but still. I feel like he's saying he's here to listen, but really he much rather not in order to keep his "easy" life. What a shallow thing for him to say about the girls he dates. Anyway, can't wait to read more! :o)

Author's Response:

I love what you are saying about Justin being all talk, and you've gotten a lot of him figured out, as you'll see in future chapters. He has a lot of growing up to do, and not much time.

But in his defence; its not an easy thing to deal with, and he didn't really end up in this situation by choice.




Tina (Anonymous) on Dec 11, 2009 07:10 am (Chapter 13)
I love that he's trying to help her as much as possible.

Author's Response: I guess keyword here is 'trying'...



JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 10, 2009 08:23 pm (Chapter 13)
This chapter was heartbreaking! Especially Justin's dream at the end! Wow...no wonder Jordan is so messed up. Sad, but great update!

Author's Response:

Thank you

Yes, they have a lot to deal with now, and it will be a whole lot worse before things can turn for them




Tink (Signed) on Dec 10, 2009 11:40 am (Chapter 13)
Still loving this story and can't wait to read more. He really needs to break up with Jessica!

Author's Response:

Thank you:-)

Yes, he does, but she's the only non-frightening thing in his life right now, so why would he want to?






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