Comments For Temptation
-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 09, 2009 04:25 pm (Chapter 19)
i would of whooped her mommas ass. ohhh the lordd, would have to be with me. i'd beat her to a pulp.



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 09, 2009 03:02 pm (Chapter 19)
I'm glad that Justin stood up for her and didn't let her mother talk about her like that. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 08, 2009 11:03 pm (Chapter 18)
I'm so happy everybody knows how horrible victoria is. I can only imagine how this is going to go. I really just want madison to slap victoria one good time. Lol! I'm glad madison has had justin there with her for support though. It's really great. Update soon! :o)



-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 08, 2009 04:56 pm (Chapter 18)
okayy...you can not leave us hanging like that!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 08, 2009 12:06 pm (Chapter 18)
I'm glad that Justin has been  there for her when she needs him. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 10:07 pm (Chapter 17)
 I feel so bad for her, but atleast she knows now that she hasn't been unloved and alone like she thought she was. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS



MochaB (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 09:27 pm (Chapter 17)
That was definitely sad, but I'm really happy her dad said all that he said and she got to hear it all, especially that he loves her and he was at her brother's funeral. I'm also glad justin was there for her. Victoria...no words for her. No good ones at least. Lol update soon! :o)



-stevonnaj (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 05:50 pm (Chapter 17)
awww. :/ that reminds me of my daddy. he was there when my grandfather died. he took it really bad. my mom was the only one who could help him. :( but add soon! :)



WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 05:50 pm (Chapter 17)

this made me cry.  i just went threw this (well, not with all the drama, and my mother passing away 10 months ago, and watching her die) but i liked how her father was able to tell her he loved her and spilled everything one before he died.




meggie (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 05:42 pm (Chapter 17)

well damn, thanks for bring back all the bad memories of my grandpa! lol actually i'm good...a little sad but i'm not crying.

loved it! cant wait for more! 

ps- maybe mommy dearest will get hers? *wink wink nudge nudge*




JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 25, 2009 03:48 pm (Chapter 17)
I'm in tears right now! Wow it's about time someone put Victoria in her place! This was a very emotional chapter and you wrote it beautifully. Great update!



MochaB (Signed) on Aug 24, 2009 06:24 pm (Chapter 16)
Woooohooo!! It happened and it was great! Well to read about that is. Lol sad about her dad, but victoria is exactly what she called her. I hope she definitely does not get one cent of the money maddy's dad is leaving her. She is absolutely horrible. But I love lynn's speech to her. So sweet. :o) and I'm happy justin is there with her during this. Can't wait to see what happens next!! :o)



JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 24, 2009 05:14 pm (Chapter 16)
*sigh* It finally happened...and then you dropped this bombshell!! I knew it couldn't last long. You're very sneaky!! HAHA anyway the scene was very well written and I loved the update! Her mom is unbelievable and I kinda hate her! Update again soon!



-stevonnaj (Signed) on Aug 24, 2009 05:02 pm (Chapter 16)
aww. thats sad. :(



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 24, 2009 11:06 am (Chapter 16)
I'm glad that Justin is there for her when she really needs someone. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS





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