Comments For Temptation
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 10:07 pm (Chapter 17)
I feel so bad for her, but atleast she knows now that she hasn't been unloved and alone like she thought she was. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
MochaB (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 09:27 pm (Chapter 17)
That was definitely sad, but I'm really happy her dad said all that he said and she got to hear it all, especially that he loves her and he was at her brother's funeral. I'm also glad justin was there for her. Victoria...no words for her. No good ones at least. Lol update soon! :o)
-stevonnaj (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 05:50 pm (Chapter 17)
awww. :/ that reminds me of my daddy. he was there when my grandfather died. he took it really bad. my mom was the only one who could help him. :( but add soon! :)
WhiteSoxLuvr9 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 05:50 pm (Chapter 17)
this made me cry. i just went threw this (well, not with all the drama, and my mother passing away 10 months ago, and watching her die) but i liked how her father was able to tell her he loved her and spilled everything one before he died.
meggie (Signed) on Aug 25, 2009 05:42 pm (Chapter 17)
well damn, thanks for bring back all the bad memories of my grandpa! lol actually i'm good...a little sad but i'm not crying.
loved it! cant wait for more!
ps- maybe mommy dearest will get hers? *wink wink nudge nudge*
JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 25, 2009 03:48 pm (Chapter 17)
I'm in tears right now! Wow it's about time someone put Victoria in her place! This was a very emotional chapter and you wrote it beautifully. Great update!
