ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Nov 07, 2010 06:57 pm (
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Not happy. That's all I have to say. Not happy.
But on a side note... I love the name you give to your minor characters that happen to be pretty girls in boots with sexy voices.
Author's Response: Ha! I didn't even think of that. Hang in there... I gotta make her suffer a little for being such a dumbass.
Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2010 10:14 pm (
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OMG that fight just makes me want to cry...these 2 are meant for each other! Serena needs to pull her head out of her ass and wake up and realize that JC just gave her an ultimatum. PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Already writing the next chapter. Working on it this week, PROMISE.
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Nov 06, 2010 10:12 pm (
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I am
so not mad at JC! Serena on the other hand -- what an idiot! Ah! Really? I'm so damn confused...I think she just ruined my Saturday night. I'm going to bed. Ah!
Author's Response: I know, right? She's a twit. I gotta make her suffer a smidge. Hang in there!
l-dawg (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2010 07:45 pm (
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Oh my gosh! That was brutal! I flinched a couple of times through that fight. I'm glad you got back to the story, I was worried for a while there. Can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: I had a feeling a few people would not like this chapter... but I don't write fairy tales, man! Lol. Hang in there... I won't make it hurt too long. Already writing the next chapter.
grishy (Signed) on Nov 06, 2010 07:23 pm (
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It feels like I was on the fight actually, so real and hurtfull. Don't make us wait too much please....
Author's Response: Already writing the update! Hang in there!
liz (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2010 08:08 pm (
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I'm dying for the next part of this story! By far my favorite JC story!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late respond, but I'm all updated now~!
grishy (Signed) on Oct 03, 2010 08:54 pm (
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I loved this chapter! Tyler was a great distraction from JC being away
Author's Response: Lol Yeah I had to invent something to talk about while JC was gone. Sorry for the late respond, I am just now getting to some of my reviews.
azchickadee (Signed) on Sep 22, 2010 11:43 pm (
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so much drama! lol...I'm glad Tyler wasn't hurt anymore than he was, but the way he acted about the party was unacceptable, drunk or not. I hope JC gives him a stern talking to when he gets home. Maybe it's time for Tyler to move out?
Author's Response: I think so but it may take a life event in order for it to happen. He's a smidge too comfortable and JC isn't QUITE doing enough about it. I was actually excited about this chapter and excited about the chapters to come. Lots of good stuff and poor, poor Serena. Gonna put that girl through the ringer!
Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 22, 2010 11:25 pm (
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ooohhh my goodness I was so excited to see that you updated!! OMG I just wanted to reach through the computer and smack Tyler around for what he said and did to Serena...dumbass. JC and Serena are so freaking adorable I can't even stand it. Can't wait to read another update. Soon?
Author's Response: Soon! Gonna start sketching it out tomorrow.
l-dawg (Anonymous) on Sep 22, 2010 09:13 pm (
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I almost shit a brick when Tyler yelled at Serena! Serves him right by getting into that accident....is that too harsh? haha. I'm really glad taht he's not seriously hurt though. I think JC is stressede just by hearing what's going on in his house when he's not there. Can't wait for another chapter. Please don't take as long to update....my poor heart can't take it ;)
Author's Response: I've finished Same Time Next Week so this story is my only priority. Giving it my full attention. I'm hoping the updates will be fast and furious now... got to take my time though because I want it to be GOOD! :D
roseinvisible (Signed) on Sep 22, 2010 06:31 pm (
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< -- nearly peed herself upon being told there was an update.
< -- nearly peed herself when Tyler became an asshole.
< -- nearly peed herself when we learned of his accident.
It's a good thing I have a bladder that is in perfect health. Great job, as always.
Author's Response: Hahahah! good thing! Thank you, working on the next update. This was a fun chapter to write.
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Sep 22, 2010 12:02 pm (
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What?!?! Tyler!!!! Dammit man, y u gotta go do that for? Jeez, man.
Serena, girl, chill. Wake up! Open your eyes!
Poor JC, man, I'm ready to climb through my screen and shake Tyler & Serena mercilessly. They need to just chill.
Yay, Bar Exam! Whoo!
Moar! Moar! Moar! Moar!
Author's Response: Moar coming soon! Lol.
roseinvisible (Signed) on Aug 28, 2010 07:10 pm (
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omgoshhhhh I love this. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think I might start the new chapter tomorrow. Not sure when it'll be complete, it takes a bit to get it 'good' but it's been talking to me. :D
grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2010 05:05 pm (
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Im so into this story...but they're amazing together you're writing the perfect couple, without making perfect neather of them.Love the intimacy you put there in the bedroom scene.
Author's Response: Thanks! I try hard, lol!
JoshDonnaFan (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 09:04 pm (
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I love this story :) I'm re-reading it now and as someone who just moved, I can totally relate to her feelings on moving and her insecurities about things working out. I really connected with her and her insecurities in this chapter regarding change. I love that she's just so...real. Wonderful story :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I kinda love these two...
