Author's Response: LOVE IT! Even with all his imperfections and worries and such.... weird how that happens. HM! LOL. Thanks for your review! Love when people see it the way I do!
Maybe you should be managing JC, I like your ideas.
This prelude was really angsty, I came thinking it would be a fun tipsy JC & Serena scene and surprise, depressed JC!...You did it good girl
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought he would be more tipsy, too. I guess I have a hard time writing drunk people!
uhhhhhh excuse me. this chapter seems to have cut off early. its missing the "back at the hotel room" scene where they have yummy time again. *chessy grin*
ok but srsly... aside from my tweets I need to talk about Mars! I never had any desire to go there but now that you've mentioned it... with JC... I might lol!
The whole place reminded me a little of Star Wars. Or more specifically, the weekend JC forced me to watch the entire series in one sitting. I was never the same, after that.
I lol'd so hard at that! First, I'm a nerd and love Star Wars, the original much more than the new ones but I'd totally love having a lazy sunday with JC watching the whole series *sigh*.
"I just happened to notice you lookin' all good, over there,"
eeeeeeep! you know that "girl do you wanna ffffff...." popped in my head? lmao!
Loved this chapter SO much! His whole freak out then confession at PB&Co. was just all kinda of awesomely done!
and he was so much fun! WICKED! srsly best boyfriend ever. I'm jealous. I want him lol!
Author's Response: Lol. Sounded like a fun day, to me! Your (and other) reviews always make me feel better. GAH the mental torture I give myself over fanfiction. *nono* Happy you enjoyed it. You can thank our friend for the Mars idea. That place is NERD.TASTIC! lol. He'd love it. There will be yummytime in the next chapter. They have to miss each other!
ooooo tomorrow! tomorrow! I love ya! Tomorrow!
*clicks next*
oh wait! love the whole.... "go on tour MY way" idea. Someone needs to send the real JC that memo.
Author's Response: Lol. Oh, look I already have a review! Wonder who it could beeee???? Lol. Dood. Taking a memo. For serious.
Author's Response: What a combination!
I'm with Serena, grumpy, bossy, bitchy JC is sexy...hehehehe
I think this chapter is written very well; a hokking start, a good pace, a peak (the accident), and a calm end. Goog job!
Author's Response:
Thanks !!! I was happy with how it came out..
i have this huge cheesy smile on my face.... lol!
because i dont tell you EVERY damn time i interview... ehm... I LOVE THIS STORY!
srsly like... everything. just everything. awesome.
He was so deliciously evil, even when I was mad at him. Even when we were fighting, he was hot. I loved him and hated him, at the same time.
THIS! YES!
My arms slid around him, clinging to him as we stood on the sidewalk, in front of a brightly lit restaurant on a busy street in Brooklyn, enjoying a long, slow, romantic kiss like there was no one else on the planet.
ooooooomg! *sigh* I want him. mine. damn you!
and yeah... thank you for letting them... well you know... that was fucking hot lol!
Author's Response: My work here is done! Lol. Well, thanks, I'm glad you like it! And yeah... sometimes a sex scene just plants itself in the story where I had no plans to put one. :| It's like a bad child, sometimes. It really does whatever it wants and makes me write it.
aaaaaawwwwwwwwww! they napped!
god i love this story. you gave me a freakin heart attack with that highway accident though... geezus!
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you had a reaction to the accident! Not to be mean, of course... I just spent a lot of time revising it so it sounded just right... scary and grippiing but JC is there to save the day and offer comfort, like always.
Author's Response: Lol. I try, I try.
"I could have melted into a puddle, right there on the sidewalk. As imperfect as he insisted he was – and I found out every day how right he was about that—he was perfect for me, in every way."
I literally sighed out loud at that line. I love it. It sums up their relationship perfectly!
Author's Response: Isn't it sweet? They kind of make me laugh, in my head.
Author's Response: Ooooh, a new reader! Exciting!!! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I totally agree with you on the first person POV, but I felt like the story needed to come from a unique perspective and not one where we know his thoughts and motives. This way we experience the story through her eyes. I'm so happy you enjoyed it so far!
How many ways I love this chapter...
1.- The call about "green" job
2.- The way JC wakes up
3.- Sexy pool game
4.-JC being teased about his stylish taste
5.- Hand in back pocket
6.- The whole restaurant interaction
7.-New York
....8.- Post exorcism JC
Author's Response: LOVE IT! what a thorough list! HAHAHA! So glad you enjoyed it. I was a little worried after the last chapter that I had run out of story but.... to quote myself, 'the bitch is back!' Thanks! Off to write some more.
Thank you! This was a very fun chapter... nice after breaking my heart and sobbing uncontrollably in the last one lol!
duuuuude the whole morning sex *guh* I hate her sometimes. Your fictional character is so damn lucky! lol!
the seedy dive joint was adorable! I wanna drink tap beer and play pool with JC! OMG THANK YOU FOR TWEEZING HIS EYEBROWS!
hhhmmm what else....
UGH the whole ass squeezing in the street... yes that would totally be me. and i love how they remembered their first date... awww!
Can't wait for NY :)
Author's Response: I will never forget being called a fucker. Love it!! ha! I totally never pay atteniton to his brows... i just needed a reason to use that line... but I'm so happy it worked! Yep she's pretty damn lucky... hope she realizes it!
Can I please please please go to NYC with JC instead of Serena. It would probably but a damper on what ever you have planned next, but eh oh well it would make me so very happy... oh wait fictional JC is going to NYC so not sure how that would work anyways.
I am very happy that Serena got the job. I know how it feels to be waiting to hear about job stuff.
Can't wait to hear about their NYC stop next!
Author's Response: yeah you know if it was up to me, i'd do it but... Serena doesn't share well and uh.... she said she'd beat my ass. You know she'd do it. So. Sorry! :D New York will be fun. They're hilarious in my mind...
Author's Response: Ha! exactly. Let's see what kind of trouble they can get into.
