megzor (Signed) on May 18, 2010 10:25 pm (
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loved that chapter. its nice that they are working things out. i had a feeling jc would get a bobbi effect with the red hair.
Author's Response: Did she have red hair? I don't remember that... hm. Thanks for the review!
l-dawg (Anonymous) on May 18, 2010 09:04 pm (
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I'm glad he got that off his chest in therapy. I loved that she colored her hair red even if he didn't like it. I'm interested to see what happens during their holiday trip. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! And for your comment!
heartsevolve (Signed) on May 18, 2010 03:19 pm (
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JLASDKFLOAWEF YAY! I love this story and I am so glad that you update so often!
JC's confession at the therapy session made my heart hurt. He's so sweeeeet!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for reading and loving it! The updates don't always come so quickly but I'm hoping they'll be at a steady pace for awhile.
grishy (Signed) on May 18, 2010 11:18 am (
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I enjoy so much of your ability of telling JC's voice without fear. Serena is your girl, we know that, but you give him a voice as strong as her and I love it!. No too much authors that can do it, in a credible way.
His way of dealing with new look issues are impeccable, he so ready to married ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I was pretty excited about this chapter! And yes, he can sure find a way to say I hate your hair without saying I hate your hair, lol.
SJane (Signed) on May 18, 2010 07:55 am (
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I started this from start until now and I still love every minute of it.
Im so happy he's gone to a place where he can work on himself because we dnt want him and our dear serena (who when drunk I love gingernut or not).
It also still makes me wonder and pine for new jc stuff
Author's Response: Thanks for being such a dedicated reader! ;) This was a great chapter to write... and I think she learned her lesson about red hair! LOL. Therapy is going to play an integral part in their relationship in the coming chapters. Excited!
Tink (Signed) on May 18, 2010 04:06 am (
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Still loving this story. So glad he went to therapy. can't wait to read more especially about new years eve and the trip to her family
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Therapy is going to play an integral part in their relationship in the coming chapters. Excited!
azchickadee (Signed) on May 17, 2010 09:29 pm (
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"Please. And tell no one of my naked dancing."
"You kidding? On my way to write a song about it." He snickered, ahahaha!!! best line ever! I loved Serena puting on her "forbidden playlist".
and break my heart! "I don't know what it is about me that makes people want to get away from me but I want to fix that. Whatever it is." I'm glad he's finally talking to someone though. Talking good (and no I'm not just saying this because I'm a psych major! lol).
As always, amazing update. Keep up the good work, my dear :)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I really liked this chapter. Easy to write.
jersey_tenn (Signed) on May 17, 2010 08:56 pm (
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wow...just wow...its like...wow
I love it! Absolutely love it! Mel & I were just talking about loud sex today - creepy!
More, more, more...
Author's Response: *claps* Wow you guys have some interesting conversaaaaaaaaaaaationssssssss.. LOL!
Tink (Signed) on May 14, 2010 11:36 am (
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Just read this story from the start in the last week and loved it. Can't believe I hadn't already read it, hope you update again soon
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I just updated! I so appreciate your leaving a review!
grishy (Signed) on May 10, 2010 10:04 pm (
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I'm happy they made it finally!
For a moment I thought he was getting sick. Serena is so dramatic but I get her, I'm picky with my laundry too ;)
Author's Response: I thought he was too but my brain just wasn't going there. I guess he was just tired. :)
Megan (Anonymous) on May 10, 2010 02:06 pm (
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oh gosh YAY they are finally home! =). Cute how she feels like the laundry is her way of taking care of him. The whole thing about him looking at their picture and him missing her was adorable. This chapter made me tear up a bit especially when they first got home and her looking at the Welcome Home sign. The last line, "it would be the last time we'd fall asleep together for awhile" make me excited for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: new chaptah is up! thanks for your review!
azchickadee (Signed) on May 09, 2010 11:34 pm (
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"It would be the last time we'd fall asleep together for awhile." sounds like things are about to get crazy and busy for our two love birds. Hope they're strong enough to get through whatever drama's coming up! :)
Author's Response: These crazy kids can get through anything... I think....................
Dani (Anonymous) on May 09, 2010 10:21 pm (
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That is just wrong MissM to leave us with a cliffhanger like that. Now, until the next chapter my brain is going to be compiling a list of reasons why that would be the last time Serena and JC fall asleep together for awhile. Once again a great chapter and keep them coming :)
Author's Response: o/ I am evil! enjoy the next chapter!
l-dawg (Anonymous) on May 09, 2010 07:45 pm (
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You know...sometimes the moments I like these two the best are when they are disappointed, sad, or angry. It makes them more real. I loved how Serena had all those expectations that were blown and how she's disappointed because she missed him all day. I thought the welcome home sign was a nice, sweet touch. Is this the final chapter? Can't be! There's still so much more Iwant to know about them!
Author's Response: Just the last road trip chapter! There's more story to tell! They may be a little too real! Every once in awhile I have to give them a dose of fairytale, LOL!
blah (Anonymous) on May 05, 2010 11:56 am (
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that last chapter totally made up for the fighting. good turn in the story. now write more please. hah.
