Quincyluv (Signed) on Jan 27, 2009 03:14 am (Chapter 2: I Hate You)

it could just be a two part story. thats an amazing ending



champ (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 10:44 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
great chapter.... I'm not creative enough or so I don't think I am...lol so um I rather not say what else you can put to this story..but great first 2 chapters.....

Author's Response: Trust me, I didn't think I was creative enough either, I decided to just grow some balls and give it a try!!! Thank you for reading, I will be adding more soon!


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 08:38 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
I love this. I'm kinda curious about what happened that he cheated. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Very good question!....but sometimes there is not a major drama that takes place in these situations, you have to wait and see what I come up with to explain Justin's behavoir! My wheels are turning trust me!


Vikki (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 07:21 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)

omg! of course he told Trace! but he didnt have to tell her that Trace knows! *shakes head*... like ooooo that makes it all better? lol! i feel so bad! he's an ass but awwww he was crying! i want to give them both a hug. :(

and you're doing good! I mean... you could always leave it as a short if you're really stuck. but I'm greedy and would like more. :)

don't be too open to too many ideas from different people, it can take the story out of focus. just take the time you need to map it out... scribble down a little outline and just let your thoughts flow.

seriously you're doing good... don't force it and it'll come to you. :)



Author's Response: Thank you soo much for your feedback!! I have taken your advice and just been chipping away little by little, there are certain scenes that I want to put in the story so I am trying to figure out ways to include them, so how far I am fairly pleased with the outcome! Keep telling me what you think!


rev0586 (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 07:05 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
i koe wat would hurt him more! Amere needs 2 ask 4 a divorce! lets c how he'l take that...but wait he still does love her right? i mean n the 1st ch. it seemed like he really didn't want to be w. her anymore...

Author's Response: Does he love her? Hmmm...that could be debated! My view right now is that yes he still loves her, he's just an ass that cheated on his wife!!!haha


Gigi (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 06:55 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
I hope it's just that Trace knew about it!

Author's Response: LOL... Trace just knew about it!!! There is no way I could write a story about Justin and Trace having an affair with each other, I would have NO idea how to start that! haha Thank you for reading!


a_nonymous (Signed) on Jan 26, 2009 06:42 pm (Chapter 2: I Hate You)
Wait, I'm confused ... he had an affair WITH Trace or Trace knew about the affair he had with a woman?

Author's Response: Trace knew about Justin's affair with another woman.rnThank you for reading!




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