Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 24, 2013 02:07 pm (Chapter 7)
You do a great job. The dialogue flows nicely and I can feel the intensity of the emotions as if I were witnessing it myself. Keep it up!


mollyanna5 (Signed) on May 14, 2012 09:38 pm (Chapter 1)
Any chance you'll finish this story? I love that it is a Joey story! And I have twin daughters, which I hope that type of thing never happens to them!


JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 09:28 pm (Chapter 9)
Update Soon

Author's Response: i shall try.


cailinaingeal (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 09:27 pm (Chapter 1)
This is a great story. I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: thanks i need to update.


JCSCOWGIRL79 (Signed) on Sep 09, 2007 04:20 pm (Chapter 9)
I love it and thanks for updating, I have been waiting forever! lol, j/k

Author's Response: lol sorry


nsyncgurl07 (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 10:59 pm (Chapter 9)
love the update.....cant wait to see what hapens next

Author's Response: thank you :)


JCSCOWGIRL79 (Signed) on May 12, 2007 08:45 pm (Chapter 8)
I can't wait for more! I love it!

Author's Response: thanks.




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