Comments For Raw Intimacy
smrkks (Signed) on May 31, 2007 06:25 pm (Chapter 29)
that was sweet at the end... but the beginning pissed me off. i felt violated just reading that. but thankfully you fixed it uppp. good woork.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Good, because that was the purpose of the beginning. I did feel the need to fix it in the end though. Thanks for the feedback!
Chelsia (Signed) on May 31, 2007 09:20 am (Chapter 29)
perfect. and i loved the part where he said that if he eever wanted to have a baby he wanted beth to be the mother. so cute. you should udpate again :)
Author's Response: He does love her, no matter what. Updates are coming soon!
Author's Response: He does love her, no matter what. Updates are coming soon!
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 30, 2007 01:58 pm (Chapter 29)
finally. i have been sitting over her in agony waiting for any kind of resolution, thank goodness she gave into him, *sigh* so this is a crossroads. either more twists and turns or the end is in sight.....love it mags :)
Author's Response: You never know with this story. Be prepared for anything. Of course, if you give me the dirt on ashes I could give you a little hint as to what will happen... lol
Author's Response: You never know with this story. Be prepared for anything. Of course, if you give me the dirt on ashes I could give you a little hint as to what will happen... lol
alimera (Signed) on May 30, 2007 08:56 am (Chapter 29)
well i certainly hated the way this chapter started but loved the way it ended! update again soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending, more is coming.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending, more is coming.
LuLu (Signed) on May 30, 2007 01:21 am (Chapter 29)
Yay they're gonna try to make it work again. I hope they get it right this time. Tell Lynn, Trace, Cameron and Jake(he seems shady to me I don't like him) to back off and mind their own business this time.
Can't wait for more!
P.S. Could you put the link to your website in the next update?
Author's Response: I'll put out the word to leave the two of them alone but you know, they are bound to show up. lol A link will be in the notes of the next chapter.
Can't wait for more!
P.S. Could you put the link to your website in the next update?
Author's Response: I'll put out the word to leave the two of them alone but you know, they are bound to show up. lol A link will be in the notes of the next chapter.
lostinadreamx (Signed) on May 29, 2007 09:44 pm (Chapter 29)
they have to be the absolute cutest couple ever. i love them together... and Justin was a huge ass when it came to everything... but he loves her. im so glad they are going to try again. hehe
Author's Response: They win the award in my mind lol. He was an ass but in the end, he pulled thorugh. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: They win the award in my mind lol. He was an ass but in the end, he pulled thorugh. Thanks for the feedback.
chazgurl4life (Signed) on May 29, 2007 08:13 pm (Chapter 29)
aww...i just love the tw of them together....update ASAP lol :-)
Author's Response: Me too, glad you liked it. Updates are coming.
Author's Response: Me too, glad you liked it. Updates are coming.
SexualCoco (Signed) on May 29, 2007 07:21 pm (Chapter 29)
Finally, they are getting their stuff together. I'm glad they're deciding to give it one more try and I can't wait to see where it goes next. Thanks for the update, love the story!
Author's Response: Yep, they are going round again. Let's hope Justin get's his act together this time.
Author's Response: Yep, they are going round again. Let's hope Justin get's his act together this time.
