Comments For Raw Intimacy
lostinadreamx (Signed) on May 23, 2007 04:01 pm (Chapter 28)
Author's Response: They have something special. I love the last line as well, one of my favorites. Thanks for the feedback!
oh wow. that was amazing. I love the chemistry that Beth and Justin have.
and that last line just gave me chills. i can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: They have something special. I love the last line as well, one of my favorites. Thanks for the feedback!
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 22, 2007 07:34 pm (Chapter 28)
thank GOD. i know its small and not a real fix, but YES! i love this mags, really truely!
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 22, 2007 07:33 pm (Chapter 28)
thank GOD. i know its small and not a real fix, but YES! i love this mags, really truely!
Author's Response: So close, yet so far. lol Thanks Ashley.
Author's Response: So close, yet so far. lol Thanks Ashley.
Chelsia (Signed) on May 22, 2007 07:29 pm (Chapter 28)
i must say, that last line is PERFECT. It totally changes everything and I like that he just says it. Ok, so awesome chapter. pfft, and let's get jake out of there, k? :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I loved the last line myself. I'll work on Jake :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I loved the last line myself. I'll work on Jake :)
sChErZo (Signed) on May 22, 2007 02:45 pm (Chapter 28)
amazing chapter!!! i'm happy she didn't go through with jake...that would've been TOO weird!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, no Jake for Beth. She has another guy in her mind lol
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, no Jake for Beth. She has another guy in her mind lol
