SexualCoco (Signed) on May 26, 2011 10:33 pm (- Five - Pt.2)
Girl, I just re-read this today and fell in love with it all over again lol. Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy this short and that I hope you are well. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!



Timberlake (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 11:58 pm (- Five - Pt.2)
i loveeeeeeeeeeee them so much!!!!! aw, justin got his cherry popped :D lol that was extremely inappropriate, but damn it, it's true! if only guys were still virgins...*sigh* "Don't look so surprised. You're not the only one who gets to fall in love." adorable! you work wonders with your fiction, girl. this was a fantabulous story from the first chapter and it ended beautifully. i kinda want a series of justin and kenisha's "sex ed: 101" sessions, haha. oh....that would be awesome, but i'll just use my imagination instead. :)

Author's Response: Aww, I'm happy you love those two. They were a fun pair to write and yes, omg, Justin isn't innocent anymore hehe and they're in love! If only there were guys like that in abundance. lol. I'm happy you enjoyed this one so much, I appreciate that you like the stuff I write. I love your work too missy! :) And I didn't plan on a series or sequel because of all the updates I have to get out. I would like too, but I can't now. :-S But thanks for commenting and letting me know you liked. :)



Timberlake (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 11:36 pm (- Five - Pt.1)
damn, justin can hold a grudge! lol an entire month? talk about just ending the friendship haha. awww, justin's in loveeeeeee :) how cute is that? i think kenisha's a lot better than me 'cause if justin's fine ass came stepping at the shower buck nekkid, he would be a virgin no more. that's all i'm gonna say about that...lol

Author's Response: Haha yes, he def. held a grudge against his friends because of what happened but at least they made up. And I feel you on the Kenisha part. if it were me, I'd not have the self control with a fine dude like J standing naked in front me. lol Glad you liked. :)



MochaB (Signed) on Nov 13, 2009 12:43 am (- Five - Pt.2)
Eeeeek!! Ohmygosh I absolutely adored this story! I've never said I adored a story before, but that's the first word that came to mind and fit. I think I just fell in love with this justin. Lol he was too cute and so sexy in a not so obvious way. Whenever you wrote about him taking off his glasses and cleaning them cause of his nerves I just smiled and giggled cause it was so stinkin' cute! Lol anyway, I saw yesterday that you finished it and was like "I have been meaning to read this story for how long? 5 chapters? I'm reading this right now!" So glad I did. It was awesome. Loved kenisha! All the characters were pretty great. Wonderful job ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: Aw! Well i'm happy you adored it. Justin was def. adorable how could you not fall in love with him? *sigh* I believe there are still dudes like that out there...well, I hope there are lol. Yes, I found his little glasses habit cute too! lol. I can dig a guy who wears glasses once he looks cute with it. hehe. I'm happy you enjoyed this one chica! I had fun writing them and Kenisha was a great sport too! Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it as always. :)



SexualCoco (Signed) on Nov 11, 2009 08:49 pm (- Five - Pt.2)
I meant to write a review yesterday, but D this was so good/cute/amazing. I love how he just came out with it and was like "I'm ready", I cracked the hell up on that part. Great job girlie, hope you're doing well and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Author's Response: Aww, Bri! yay! Happy you read to the end and enjoyed it. I had fun with this one. Just sorry that it took me so long to get out. And yeah, omg the "I'm ready." I thought it would be funny & cute. hehe. :) Thanks for commenting and I'm doing good. Just school, you know how it goes. Hope you're well too and will give us some updates in the near future...no rush. :)



mzmillion (Signed) on Nov 11, 2009 10:59 am (- Five - Pt.2)
Awwww I loved it... Virgin J. SEXXXY

Author's Response: Omg yes too sexy! I wish I had one like him! haha. Glad you loved and still read after it took me forever to get out. Appreciate it. :)



MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 10, 2009 06:21 pm (- Five - Pt.2)
Finally! Woot Woot! Sequel, please and thank you.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh yes! finally! it was about time. hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed. Ask for a sequel, I didn't plan on it. Too many other updates to get out. But thank you so much for reading and liking. :)



nene22 (Signed) on Apr 16, 2009 01:33 am (- Four -)
I read this story on another site and was so excited when I saw not only did you have it on this site but chapter 4 came with it. I got chills reading chapter 4, how could trace come after my sweet justin like that in front of all his peoples? Anyway I loved how K didn't care about his "issue" and just came to his rescue like that. Please Please Please bless us with an update.

Author's Response: Awww I'm so happy you like this little short so much. I agree what happened to Justin with Trace was bad. We'll see if they can get back on good terms. I'm working on the next update. I'm not sure when yet, but I hope to have it up some time soon since I'm planning for it to be the last. We'll see how it goes. Thanks so much for commenting and letting me know what you think! :)



Timberlake (Signed) on Mar 30, 2009 11:39 pm (- Four -)
kenisha is so cute, but i swear to goodness, i would be teaching justin in that bathroom instead of cleaning him up. what's the point of cleaning if we're just gonna get dirrty??? lol i need you to update NOW! =]

Author's Response: OMG! why do you want her to jump on him after he had such an experience with his friends? Ok, but I totally agree, if it were me, more getting dirty less cleaning. hehe. But soon, I promise...that dirty moment shall come. haha. Thanks so much for liking and commenting girl. Speaking of, me needs to catch up on Do Over. Anyway thanks again. I'll update as soon as I can.



mzmillion (Signed) on Mar 29, 2009 05:37 pm (- Four -)
love it....its cute how you say spectacles instead of glasses...

Author's Response: hehe thanks. I actually like the word spectacles. I say it myself sometimes instead of glasses. *shrugs* lol but thanks for commenting and liking. :)



Devon (Signed) on Mar 29, 2009 04:23 pm (- Four -)
What to say? That Trace is a piece of work. He's supposedly Justin's best friend but he just forced him admit something he really didn't want to in a public location! In front of everyone ...I mean, he could've waited to discuss this without Kenisha being there, but I guess he's a fucking asshole like that. I don't get what the big deal is. Why did Trace need to know? Just because you're best friends doesn't mean you tell each other EVERYTHING. But ..I guess it was kind of good anyway, because now Kenisha knows and it won't be a big secret looming over their head. And now maybe Trace and his other friends will learn to be more respectful towards Justin. It's kewl to play around and joke on one other but it's not kewl when you're tearing down someone's self esteem. I can't wait to see what's next for them! I really like them together. :-) Great writing.

Author's Response:

Hey Girl, first off thanks for reading and giving this little short a chance and for commenting on the chaps to let me know your thoughts. I appreciate it.

And yeah, Trace did mess things up with being a drunk and jealous and nosey best friend. I agree they don't need to tell each other everything but Trace doesn't see it that way. We'll see how things turn out with him and Justin. I agree, Justin's admittance definitely gave his friends something to think about.

Thanks so much again for the feedback and glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to get the last part out soon. I think I can fit everything else into one update I hope. If not two. :)




SexualCoco (Signed) on Mar 29, 2009 04:19 pm (- Four -)
Wow D, that was just...uncomfortable (to say the least). I felt so embarrassed for Justin but at least the truth is out and now everyone understands what's been going on with him. Kenisha did such an awesome job comforting him too, the words she said were just right. Love this story girlie and I can't wait to read about her "teaching" him some things, lol. I hope you're well! *hugs*

Author's Response: OMG I know it was so uncomfortable for everyone in the room. *sigh* But gotta love Justin and Kenisha right? Oh boy, I can't wait for the *teaching* him part too. hehe. Bri, girl what's going on with you? I miss you. And your story. :) But all is well on my end, hope your end is good too with school and everything. Thanks for dropping a line. :-D



Devon (Signed) on Mar 29, 2009 04:06 pm (-Three -)
Mannnn. You know what ...I don't really care for his friends much. I mean I know they have that bond where they can joke with each other, but when they see that Justin is so obviously tense they should've backed up. I just feel like they over did it. And why does Trace care so much about what Justin does? It's not like he's his boyfriend or something. lmfao. But other than that ...their first kiss was amazing. :-)



Devon (Signed) on Mar 29, 2009 03:48 pm (- Two -)
Awww. This was really cute. When Justin got freaked out and wanted to leave I thought that it might've turned into something bad, but it's good to see that they bounced back from that. And it's really cute that Kenisha seems to be realllly into Justin and gets shy around him as well. And it'll be interesting to see how they progress considering that her friend thinks he's not her type.



Devon (Signed) on Mar 29, 2009 03:33 pm (- One -)
This is really cute! I love how you're writing Justin so shy and reserved. It's a total opposite of his actual personality. Very interesting.





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