Author's Response: The next update is pretty well mapped out and HOPEFULLY won't take too long to write *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
aKLJADSFJOIAFJIOAFEWIJOFASNBBOUAWEF OH MY GOD KEYBOARD SMASHHHHHHH.
Okay. So.
1) “You can’t lose her because you’re scared, Justin.”
OH MY GOD, MY HEART, SWEET BABY JESUS.
2) HIS LOBSTER?! A Friends reference?! Yes. Please.
3) The bit with Ginger being Trace's other woman WAS SUCH A GOOD LITTLE SURPRISE. The stories you weave, woman! I looooove it.
“So tell me. What hurts more? Thinking you should hate him or knowing you don't?” = Yessssss!!! What a good line.
4) Basically every scene with Justin broke my HEEEEART. And oh my god, is this...this is the first time they're together again since she told him she loved him, huh?! AND OH MY GOD SHE'S DRUNK, BUT HE TOLD HER HE LOVED HER, AND THAT SHE'S THE REASON HE CAME AND OMG HE'S SORRY...
Annnnd, she's so strong! Oh my god, I cannot believe she was able to just walk away. I know I couldn't have done it...BUT YEAH, THAT'S WHAT HE DESERVES, because as much as I love this Justin...he was a total dick. :(
Oh, and not even gonna lie, I may have teared up a little bit at the knowing what you don't want vs. what you do part!
The. Stories. You. Weave. AMAZING!!!
You better update soon, I'M ALREADY DYING.
Author's Response:
HAHAHA Keyboard smash!!!!
1) I laughed SO HARD at "SWEET BABY JESUS"
2) What was really funny about that line is my editor was reading it for the first time while we were IMing and all of a sudden she's like "WTF is with the lobster? Did I miss something?" The ONE person who doesn't watch Friends haha.
3) I kind of loved that little tidbit as well. It gave Ginger a little more depth and some credibiity in the chapter
4) What I really love about Justin in this story is no matter how much he fucks up everyone still feels sorry for him. He's just so damn hapless and kind of pathetic lol
And Charlotte! Finally showing some backbone as well has been a long time coming. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have the next chapter (thelastoneomg) pretty much mapped out so I'm hoping its gonna come quick. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I LOVED the corner bar line haha. Its something so simple yet provides so much hilarity haha. And Ginger! I'm a sucker for characetrs that are kind of dumb yet extremely insightful when the time is right. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
OH NO!!! I like strong Charlie. I like Charlie with a backbone but... STOP CHARLIE!!!! Turn around... tell him it's all okay.
Author's Response: I like strong Charlie too! Its about time Justin saw what it felt like to be told he wasn't good enough. Well not exactly not good enough but that just saying I'm sorry isn't enough. I'm not giving anything away but I will say there is one chapter left and well... that's all I'm saying haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YES that is exactly what I was going for! Everyone has the potential to be a lovable character but they keep making crap decisions haha. I like your analysis of the characters! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to weave more of an intricate storyline this time around and I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
jesus. it's about FUCKING TIME DUDE!
Ugh...I totally didn't see her cheating on him though. Man...that was a zing. I DID, however, see Amelia turning it around and saying that Charlotte was lying to him to make him leave her for Charlotte...that woulda been a vengeful bitch thing to do, I'd say.
Guh. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me you're updating this thing soon? I need to see how this all ends!!!
Author's Response: I am ALMOST done with the next chapter. Like I'm talking only a few paragraphs. Weirdly I wrote the beginning of this one and then skipped to the end and now I'm kind of writing back and forth until I get to the middle. I just gotta get past all this Christmas/Family hoopla and harrass my editor until she surrenders haha. So it will be very soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
WHAT?!?!?!?!? You have GOT to be kidding me. I am going to kick Justin's ass so far into next year it'll make his head spin. Oh. My. GOD!
What an IDIOT!
Girl...you've got me so damn hooked on this story that I can't stop reading and managed to read all the way through from last night until now. Sleep, be damned.
But...UGH. Amelia is all kinds of WRONG for him. and Charlotte is just so...FUCK he's blind as a bat. You really had me thinking that he was going to say that he couldn't go through with it. DAMMIT.
Author's Response: Holy crap that's quite the feat dude! This story is a beast as far as length. Justin is seriously such a retard in this story. Like he annoys ME and I "created" him haha. Glad you took the time to catch up and that you're liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter right now. I have the beginning written. I have the end written. I'm just trying to bridge the two right now which is proving to be difficult. I doubt I'll be able to get it edited before Christmas but hopefully my wonderful, fabulous, tireless editor will be able to fit it in before the new year. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I seriously read this entire story in 1 day! I am in love with this story :) Look forward to the updates, you are a true talent!!
Author's Response: Wow that's seriously intense. Mondo cookies for you for tackling this beast in one day! Updates hopefully coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Girl I love your essays haha. Its nice to see that people are thinking and feeling when they're reading and a thoughtful review lets us know that. I know I say this all the time but the next section is half way finished haha. I always write half and then my brain goes on vacation but I have a four day weekend coming up so I'm hoping I can get some writing done. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Ok, so now that I said I like Char better than Sky, now you have me thinking ahead to little pieces of there life together like how you did with ALWL...which by the way, I would love some more pieces from...
omg I'm so damn greedy but it would be so good to read and read and read.
Author's Response: HAHA yeah I've got a ton of ideas left for Skystin and I have some deleted scene ideas for Charltin so we'll be hearing from all of them again I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
OMG, so I kept seeing this story and kept putting off reading it, I don't know why since you created Skystin but I just kept saying one day I'll read it, well I started like 5 days ago and I read it all.... and it was GREAT....lol.
Please update more.... I love love them... Charlotte, I might like her more than Skylar...
Author's Response: Dude I don't blame you this story is a BEAST haha. Kudos to ANYONE who takes the time to read it through. I'm glad you're liking it! I'll agree Charlotte is more likable than Skylar haha. She spent most of ALWL being a bitch to poor weeby!j and all Charlotte does is love fiance!J. I'm workin on the next update, writing a little bit everyday so hopefully I can get it out soon. I'm hoping to have this story complete by Christmas but we'll see. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I. know. right. haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: That is of course the most frustrating part. He was working hard to hold on and she wasn't even trying *sigh* *smacks her* And happy ending? *whistles* haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
