Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 06, 2009 11:39 pm (Chapter 27)
I need another update right now!

Author's Response: Well I was working on it and got nearly all the way finished....and then decided to scrap the chapter to move the story along faster. So now I have nothing again *sigh* I'm in the NF secret Santa so that has precidence right now but after that I'm locking myself in a room and writing UTTK until my fingers fall off. Thanks for your patience and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 28, 2009 10:17 am (Chapter 27)
I think we missed a month update somewhere, please update soon, when?  I need my fix this story is so good I want them together.  Justin needs to grow some balls and do the right thing and admit that Charlie is better for me.

Author's Response: GAH I dunno when I'm going to get to update. I have the next section started and am thinking about it everyday but it's been giving me some trouble. Hopefully soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Timberlake (Signed) on Nov 13, 2009 08:22 am (Chapter 21)
can i just say that this is one of the best love scenes ever written in the history of mankind? yeah, i think i'll say that, LOL. bravo :)

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. This chapter was a pretty hard one to navigate and I'm really happy with how it turned out. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ram4 (Signed) on Nov 11, 2009 04:38 am (Chapter 27)

OMG!!! The frustration I'm feeling right now is killing me!

 

I love what MochaB said! She said it so well too! Except for not wanting Justin and Charlie to end up together anymore. I see a lot of people have been saying this! Noooooooooooo! I refuse to let it end that way. Imagine if he ended up marrying Amelia! ARGH! Hahaha.

 

I don’t want to feel bad for Amelia either! I’m happy that we finally get to see a bit of why she is the way she is, it makes her seem a lot more human! And it’s really sad about her mum and I want to feel bad for her but but but I just can’t stand her. She’s a selfish witch and he’s so dumb!!!

 

And then there’s Charlie. I can’t help feeling bad for her! I think out of all the characters I can really relate to her the most. Just the whole, being in a situation that you know is bad and you should really get out of it and half of you wants to get out of it but the other half doesn’t. Another part to that whole idea is that getting out of the situation takes a lot more effort then staying in it. Like its sort of comfortable and easy for her to stay in that job and stay with Justin whereas the other route would involve making big decisions and actually doing something about her life and a whole lot of heartbreak as well!  Hahaha am I reading too far into this?

 

I seriously love how I have no idea what is going to happen! It’s so exciting! But it’s also scary! Hahaha

 

I love it. I love it. I love it. Thanks so much for updating!

Author's Response: I love what you had to say about Charlie! I've always thought of Charlotte as a very independent person and that this things with Justin is a major detour from everything she's ever done before with anyone. Like usually she wouldn't put up with this kinda shit from a gut but like you said its so much easier to stay put then to try and get out. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Nov 10, 2009 08:39 pm (Chapter 27)
ughhhh Amelia and her bitchy self...she can cry all she wants.  or "not" cry, whatever lol.  and good ole' Charlotte, fooling herself into thinking she's actually gonna separate herself from what she's created.  gotta love these fools :)

Author's Response: BAHAHA FOOLS! Doesn't Sheldon call people that at some point? BBT!Sheldon not Puppy!Sheldon. Puppy!Sheldon cannot speak therefore he would not be able to call anyone a fool...erm...yeah. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Nov 10, 2009 12:42 am (Chapter 27)
Their feelings for each other that they let themselves feel and assumptions are like a ping pong match. Justin's for charlie, his for amelia, and charlie's for justin. And justin is so oblivious to the effect he has on charlie and her life; the choices she makes. It's terrible and sad that she even let's him have so much control. It annoys me that justin even needs a reminder of why he loves amelia. You shouldn't have to wonder then something happen and you're like "oh yeah! *snaps fingers* This is why I love her. I forgot cause she treats me like dirt all the time, but this one moment of weakness tells me where I need to be." The way amelia's family is is a representation of why she is the way she is, but that is absolutely no excuse. She's a grown woman. She doesn't have to behave the way she does. Her weak moments do not break me down and get me on her side. Charlie still makes me so mad cause she becomes weak around him and let's him guide her motions and emotions. I really want charlie to freaking man up. If he can just easily forget her and what he feels for her then she needs to be able to do so too. Don't put herself in these situations that are only going to lead to hurt. I don't even believe she needs this job. I understand she needs money to pay rent, but she should just move back home until the fall semester. If pride is keeping her from doing so she should forget that cause her pride has been diminished a long time ago. Now she just looks like a fool. It may not be noticeable on the outside, but on the inside she knows it and that's what hurts and plaques the most; that inner hurt and shame. And no he shouldn't cheat on amelia, but he can't treat charlie like this either. He's taking advantage of her kindness and friendship. He can't have the best of both worlds. He needs to stick to one and I seriously hope it's amelia so he can be miserable. He just pisses me off now. I'm done feeling sorry for him. He chose her so deal with her and don't go complaining to charlie or looking for the opposite. I just want charlie to say no and mean it. No she will not listen, no she will not be 'the other woman,' no she will not allow him to control her emotionally anymore. There has to come a time when she gets completely fed up with feeling like crap and stands up to him and for herself. I really hope that time comes soon. Whew! Glad I finally got to read this and get all that off my chest. Until next time...haha. Update soon!! :o)

Author's Response: YES!!! I love everything you had to say. That's exactly what I was trying to get across. What I love about these guys is that they take what positive character traits they have and turn them into negative ones. Amelia takes Justin's compassion and general gentlemanly-ness and turns him into a doormat. Justin enables Amelia's determinedness and perfectionism to turn into a form of domination. Charlotte brings out the stronger more self serving part of Justin but it often backfires in her face because he only uses it to stand up to her. Justin uses Charlotte's compassion and turns her into a doormat. It makes them all so much fun to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Nov 08, 2009 12:30 pm (Chapter 27)
I hate that I feel a bit sorry for Amelia because of her childhood, but that doesn't give her an excuse to abuse Justin the way she does.  Someone at jjb hit it right on the head, he's suffering from battered spouse syndrome.  Part of me hates that Charlie's caught in the middle of this, but part of me says she doesn't have anyone to blame for her situation but herself.  She's chosen to have this affair with Justin.  I'm really torn on how I want this to end.  Part of me says it'd be cliched to have Justin dump Amelia and live happily ever after with Charlie - wonder fairytale ending, but not really true to life.  Part of me says I'd hate it if he were to stay with Amelia.  At any rate, I can't wait to read more. 

Author's Response: YES I love everything you had to say on all of them. They're all so tangled up in each other and Justin is just too wishy washy right now to really breakthrough in either situation. *sigh* I'm glad you're liking it because I'm really loving writing it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Nov 08, 2009 04:06 am (Chapter 27)
Darn, I was hoping Charlie and Justin would do it in his house. I know it's wrong but damn it would have been freakin' hot! LoL. I am glad that Charlie is gonna try and go back to school though. It might help her feel better about things. Anyway, fantastic job! I can't wait to see what else you have in store. :-D -Traci

Author's Response: Girl Justin and Charlie doin it in the kitchen with Amelia upstairs woulda been ten kinds of wrong hahaha butyeahitwouldabeenhotomg lol. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Schnessa (Signed) on Nov 06, 2009 07:09 pm (Chapter 1)

I haven't left you a review in a long time! What the hell is wrong with me! haha You know you're my favorite bish! lol 

Anyways onto my review, I fucking hate Justin! I don't care that Amelia's a bitch or whatever, I'm used to that by now. So she had a rough childhood and her mother wasn't there, cry me a freaking river. Who cares about her?

I know she's an important part of the story but I just don't have it in me to feel sorry for her.

So, onto the hating Justin part... how can he not see how Charlie makes him feel? How can he just ignore that? It's almost like it's okay for Amelia to use him so he uses Charlie.

Don't get me wrong I'm glad they finally hooked up but it's a major sign when you can't live without someone so much that you actually experience pain in your heart and chest at the realization that they might not always be there. He needs to wake the fuck up and either decide that he's going to endure his self imposed hell with Amelia or let Charlie go.

As for Charlie, I really think she should just move on. She's always going to love Justin but is it really worth it? Sticking around for someone who doesn't even have the balls to admit that ya'll are indeed in a fucking relationship?  

I guess I would just love to see her pull away from him a bit. Put some distance between her and him just to see how he reacts. Just to see if it wakes him up a bit.

Okay so I done ranting and raving like a lunatic but it was a wonderful update it's just sometimes I want *makes a choking motion* the both of them. 



Author's Response: YAY good to hear from ya girl! I love the general frustration goin on haha. I know its killing you guys but trust me it's killing me getting these kids all messed up on each other lol Thanks for coming in and reading and reviewing!!!



Jbear (Signed) on Nov 01, 2009 08:40 pm (Chapter 27)
Who said Amelia could be human? I was perfectly happy wit her being a bitch! LOL Change her back. I want Justin wit Charle. Great update.


Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT! Everyone's goin on all hating her and stuff and then she has to go and have some kind of crappy childhood and make us all feel sorry for her haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jbear (Signed) on Nov 01, 2009 08:39 pm (Chapter 27)
Who said Amelia could be human? I was perfectly happy wit her being a bitch! LOL Change her back. I want Justin wit Charle. Great update.

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT! Everyone's goin on all hating her and stuff and then she has to go and have some kind of crappy childhood and make us all feel sorry for her haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vessy (Signed) on Nov 01, 2009 02:13 pm (Chapter 27)
well its always worth the wait :) good job! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Guh I'm glad it was worth it. Is it just me or is this getting harder? Just gotta keep plowing along I guess haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Nov 01, 2009 10:56 am (Chapter 27)
That  was good, i really liiked it. But i wish justin would just leave amelia, and tell charlie how he really feels. So can't wait till you update again girl!

Author's Response: YAY i'm glad you liked it! Justin needs to get his head outta his butt that's for sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Nov 01, 2009 04:52 am (Chapter 27)

I perfectly understand *O* College somehow sucks the inspiration to write >_< But I'm glad you updated~

First, a big THANK YOU for building up the Justin x Amelia dynamics and for giving Amelia redeeming qualities. I'm not saying she's totally lovable but I think it explains why she is the way she is. While this wont make her the best character in this story, she's not just one dimensional. Same goes for the Amelia and Justin relationship. I hate it but at the same time I understand why they stay in their fucked up relationship.

As for the JustinxCharlotte part, I'm not entirely sure how I feel about them now. I really can't wait to see what you have in store for them. Or which direction you'll take this. I'm glad Charlotte is thinking of leaving.

Lovely as always dear :) Will patiently await the next installment ♥ 



Author's Response: Yeah Amelia and Justin and just Amelia in general were getting pretty flat. That's the hard part with posting as you go is that you can't really go back and fix stuff because it's already out there. But on the plus side of that you have to get kind of creative in doing something about it in the now which can take you in some pretty interesting directions. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jaimie (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2009 08:18 pm (Chapter 27)
Its about time you updated! I hope the next one is sooner rather than later!! :) I feel for Charlie. I hate how Justin can seem attatched to her when they are together and he makes it seem like he has feelings for her but when she brings up their "relationship" he is gonna freak?!?! He shoulda thought about that BEFORE he slept with her! Gosh guys can be such asses sometimes! And Amelia...she is soooo manipulative and bitchy! You play out the character well. She DOES have Justin wrapped around her little finger! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah I know this one took a really long time. Midterms hit me outta nowhere. You'd think I would realize since it was the middle of my quarter but it always sneaks up on me haha. I'm glad you like how Amelia is playing out. She's one of my favorite characters to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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