Comments For Christmas At the Little Bakery
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Apr 22, 2015 10:17 pm (Chapter 11)
I loved this. I hope Gem talks to her Mom. And I'm glad Maggie can talk to Justin. I was so happy to see that you updated :D
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Mar 13, 2015 04:15 pm (Chapter 10)
Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't 100% convinced the argument was in the right place, but the dialogue wouldn't get out of my head so I'm going with it. Thanks for your support. :)
Don't know how I missed this, but lovely chapter. Well, the argument was lovely, but I really could feel how Gem and Maggie were both feeling. Maggie was kind of harsh, but what she said is true.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't 100% convinced the argument was in the right place, but the dialogue wouldn't get out of my head so I'm going with it. Thanks for your support. :)
Nikki (Anonymous) on Mar 11, 2015 09:08 am (Chapter 1)
Bravo, sometimes you need to stand up for yourself...do what's best for you and not put your family and friends' needs before your own...something I struggle with on a daily basis. Nice update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It was a hard lesson to learn, but I already feel much better and happier, which can only be a good thing. And I'm writing again! Hurray! Thanks for your comment :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It was a hard lesson to learn, but I already feel much better and happier, which can only be a good thing. And I'm writing again! Hurray! Thanks for your comment :)
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Mar 10, 2015 06:06 pm (Chapter 10)
I am so sorry this was hard to write, especially after a falling out with a friend. That always brings out more emotions...But I must say, bravo. You know just where to go to make the reader want more and to see what's next in all facets of the story.
Author's Response: Awww thanks so much. X
Author's Response: Awww thanks so much. X
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 31, 2015 08:56 pm (Chapter 9)
Oh wow at this chapter. I wasn't expecting this. I love the dynamic it gives the story...that things aren't like they seem from Maggie's point of view. I hope Gem gets things figured out. Great job!
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 23, 2015 02:46 pm (Chapter 8)
...and I enjoy seeing where this goes, as well. Nice chaper.
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 23, 2015 12:02 pm (Chapter 8)
Thank you thank you for the birthday shout out.
I loved how simple the date was and how fun!! I can't wait until she realizes WHO Justin is..I know in the story (probably in real life as well) he wants to be just Justin (and is..) but yeah.. i so hope this story goes farther than he leaves and they talk sporadically or something. I'm hooked.
I loved how simple the date was and how fun!! I can't wait until she realizes WHO Justin is..I know in the story (probably in real life as well) he wants to be just Justin (and is..) but yeah.. i so hope this story goes farther than he leaves and they talk sporadically or something. I'm hooked.
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 20, 2015 09:57 pm (Chapter 7)
Gah. I love it. Must have more!!! I want to go doodle in a notebook 'Ginger & J' with little sappy hearts.
"Look, that leaves us ou-" Hush Joey muse.
"Look, that leaves us ou-" Hush Joey muse.
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 19, 2015 05:52 pm (Chapter 7)
Simple, cute and sweet. Update soon, please.
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 10:14 pm (Chapter 6)
Oh I so hope your muses come back. I love this story!
And this part ... She'd become used to taking merely a supporting role in other people's lives, and she had to keep reminding herself that it was okay to be the centre of attention, and that she should relax and enjoy it.
that's how I feel pretty much all the time.
And this part ... She'd become used to taking merely a supporting role in other people's lives, and she had to keep reminding herself that it was okay to be the centre of attention, and that she should relax and enjoy it.
that's how I feel pretty much all the time.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 16, 2015 03:10 pm (Chapter 6)
For domeone who's muse deserted them, this was a great chapter. I'm so glad you updated. I absolutely loved it, especially the part where she was trying to figure out why "JT and the Tennessee Kids" sounded so famiiar with her and the little quip at the end as to Justin making her get used to getting compliements.
Update when you can.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouragement, it really means a lot. Turns out muse wanted some time off over New Year, but he's back now so hopefully the updates should keep coming. Thanks again for taking the time to let me know what you think.
Update when you can.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouragement, it really means a lot. Turns out muse wanted some time off over New Year, but he's back now so hopefully the updates should keep coming. Thanks again for taking the time to let me know what you think.
champ (Signed) on Jan 01, 2015 03:13 pm (Chapter 5)
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. Progress is a little slow as my computer died and I'm a little stuck, but I should have an update out soon :)
Great story. Keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. Progress is a little slow as my computer died and I'm a little stuck, but I should have an update out soon :)
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Dec 24, 2014 03:56 pm (Chapter 5)
Ahhhh! The ending was so cute!! Im so glad you updated! This put a huge (cheesy) smile on my face.
Author's Response: Glad I could bring a smile to your face in time for Christmas. Have a great one!
Author's Response: Glad I could bring a smile to your face in time for Christmas. Have a great one!
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Dec 20, 2014 04:17 pm (Chapter 4)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm really glad you're enjoying reading this. There should be more soon!
Hahaha the end was so cute and I'm sure everybody would react the same way if given the chance to be asked out by Justin (or anyone in JC for that matter).
Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm really glad you're enjoying reading this. There should be more soon!
