theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 26, 2014 10:26 pm (Group Texts and Gallery Shows)

*Places baseball bat back on the floor* GOOD! Next chapter..lolz

Oooh! They are gonna get dinner all right, and probably dessert too.. ;)

But OMG! The group chat had me laughing, I can HEAR them saying those things, and Chris, the only thing he's saying is "Whaaaaa?" HAHAH! I literally LOL at that..

I love that those guys in reality really DO group chat now and then..makes me so happy!

This is getting good! *reads next chapter* I must




theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 26, 2014 10:13 pm (Breakfast and Confessions)

It is the start of something good! I KNOW it! :D

Oh and THESE lines here: JC was standing at the stove cooking, wearing his underwear and a white undershirt. His feet are bare, his hair is mussed and he is wearing his glasses. That IMAGE.. *grins* I wish he was in MY kitchen cooking bacon looking like that.. ;) Don't we all though?? :)

I'm really glad that they are getting into deeper convos with eachother, thats how a relationship supposed to work first, communication is key, and respect for eachother..

Nicely done on this chapter..




Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jun 26, 2014 08:01 pm (100 Ways)
Ohhh Damn that was hot!!! I need a cigarette and I dont even smoke!!. Love this story. Keep the chapters coming.

Author's Response: Neither do I and I would have needed one too!;)



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 26, 2014 07:58 pm (100 Ways)

Wooooo *fans self* that was HOT!! Wonderfully written :)

Haha "Cause I wouldn't want to have to sue you for false advertising."

Can't wait to read more :) :) 



Author's Response: New chapter should be up by tomorrow!



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 26, 2014 07:56 pm (Group Texts and Gallery Shows)

OMG the group texts between the guys was great! I saw Lance's interview with Larry King about that. Haha Chris "Whaaaaaa?" Joey "Is she hot?" lol!! And JC being so supportive of Ari at her gallery! And meeting Lance and Michael :)



Author's Response: I wanted to get that part into the story so bad ever since I heard Lance and Justin mention the group texts recently. I'd LOVE to be a little fly on the wall when those are going on!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 23, 2014 12:41 am (Breakfast and Confessions)
It can be really difficult to stay in present tense, but you're doing a really good job of it, while keeping the action of the story flowing. Also, I'm really enjoying your dialogue. Great chapter--love that they had "the talk." I'm looking forward to more Ari and JC!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, it makes me so happy that other people are enjoying my story and taking the time to review. More Ari and JC coming up!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 23, 2014 12:23 am (Tell Me)
Wow, Mama, this. Was. HOT! Are you sure this was your first time writing one of these? ;-) Excellent scene. And you did a great job separating Ari's & JC's points-of-view. This story is coming alone nicely...pun fully intended. ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks, it took me like 3 days to write it. I've read a million but never dared write one, guess I succeeded! 



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 22, 2014 01:06 pm (Breakfast and Confessions)
haha they had "the talk". A good talk though to get stuff out in the open and not hide things anymore! :) cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter now!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 21, 2014 10:39 pm (Bees and Brides)

The shower scene is really sweet, nothing more happened there.. ;) Not yet anyway..

Earlier in this chapter, these lines here: “I miss you too. Especially since I’ve been having really great dreams lately. It really helps when one of the last things I see is you slipping into bed in nothing but your underwear.” she grins although he can’t see her.

“Oh yeah? Want to tell me about those?” he chuckles and she hears him move around a little.

Ahh yes..dreaming about JC is the BEST.. lolz :P Only to wake up and he's not next to you is the WORST..LOL

Good chapter...thanks for the update!



Author's Response: Wouldn't that be the greatest? Mmmm.



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 19, 2014 10:05 pm (Pizzas and Beers)

These lines here: He brings that out of her; she likes that ;)

JC has that thing.. :P

I also liked when Justin re-introduced himself to Ari, and then he and JC played video games, aww! Joshtin moment.. :)

This was a cute chapter, I'll be reading more soon..




Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 19, 2014 09:33 pm (Bees and Brides)

So adorable :). He's writing a song about her :)

Love this:

"Ari?"

"Hmmm?"

"You know, if you want...you can call me Josh."

SO FREAKING CUTE! :) 



Author's Response: Tee hee ;)



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 18, 2014 11:05 pm (Tell Me)

Horrible?! Are you INSANE woman?! LOL This was HOT OMG!

It was seductive, and everything is explained in equixite detail... I love it ;) And I was gonna save this chapter for tomorrow, but its a GOOD thing I read this now before I went to bed.. :D Gonna have a good night sleep now..haha..

When JC tells Ari where does she want to be touched, I'm like, "You can touch me wherever you want.." :P

ANYWAYS...these lines here: He grins and turns to look at her again, “Oh honey, you ain’t seen nothin’ yet.”

Looking forward for more...oh yes sirree..Excellent chapter! :D



Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the last three chapters. I hope you like the next ones too! As always I look forward to your reviews!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 18, 2014 10:46 pm (Names and Hands)

I love that JC is so supportive of her, it makes me smile... :)

Now..THIS, is true, I agree on his last previous relationships:

:(

When he gets into a relationship he always wants a girl to feel like she belongs to him, that he can take care of her. He never had a habit of thinking twice when a girl would mention needing a little money or really liking something in a store. He had the money, why not use it? He always meant well, but they didn’t. It’s like he was a professional at finding and falling for girls that would take advantage of his giving nature and his soft heart. His Mom and the other guys would always be getting on his case about not realizing that he was being taken advantage of until it was too late. His heart would be broken and his wallet considerably lighter

I for one, and real fans of his would never take advantage of him like that...I work hard and pay what I can and save the rest for next month bills..lolz

But anyway, this is very good chapter, I enjoyed this one.. :)




theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 18, 2014 10:30 pm (Wet Dog and Pool Parties)

Must you end this chapter like that?? LOL

Being in the pool with JC sounds fantastic right now, especially with this heat wave going on, and its not even summer yet..

I need to read more.. :D *scurries to next chapter*




champ (Signed) on Jun 17, 2014 12:52 pm (Pizzas and Beers)
great update!!

Author's Response: Thanks for always reviewing! New chapter is up!





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