Comments For Business First
a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 12, 2011 02:19 pm (Two)
You've done such an incredible job of writing this Business Justin that I can't stand him, lol. I'd really like to smack the sense into him! Fantastic story. Update soon, please!!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it! Yeah, Justin needs some sense smacked into him by somebody!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it! Yeah, Justin needs some sense smacked into him by somebody!
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 11, 2011 08:47 pm (One)
I like the idea of this.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I appreciate you giving it a chance.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I appreciate you giving it a chance.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 11, 2011 04:59 pm (One)
Hmmm, cocky, asshole Justin who is about to get a rude awakening...I like it! I love the concept, it's so...new, lol. Great start :)
Lady T (Anonymous) on May 11, 2011 09:01 am (One)
I Love a good story where Justin is a huge jerk in the beginning. Great 1st chapter! Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Tina (Anonymous) on May 11, 2011 07:31 am (One)
He's such an asshole in this LOL, but I love the concept.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Lisa06 (Signed) on May 11, 2011 05:57 am (One)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Glad you are enjoying it!!
A very good beginning! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
xoxo
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Glad you are enjoying it!!