Comments For Business First
mzmillion (Signed) on May 30, 2011 10:09 am (Fourteen)
Ahh damn Trace....

Author's Response: LOL



Keediluv (Signed) on May 30, 2011 09:23 am (Fourteen)

Dirty, dirty, dirty motherfucker!  I knew his ass was stank, just couldn't point it out exactly.  Sorry about the profanity, just had to get that out.  Poor Justin, what is he going to do now?  I couldn't imagine confronting the person that helped me get from the lowest point in my life to the highest but, my mom always says, you have to look out for you better than anyone else.  I love that when he's with Abbey, it's a little less tense but he has to man up and deal with whatever comes.  Good, good update hon!

Ki 



Author's Response: LOL you are too funny.  You don't need to apologize, i'm glad that you're so into the story.  Justin is very confused to say the least.  I think the beach trip might be a turning point for a lot of things in the story :)



SJane (Signed) on May 30, 2011 06:22 am (Fourteen)
omg 2 updates booya baybee

and i had this feeling trace was either doing shaddy shit or just something wasnt right
as usual awesome update luv

Author's Response: Yay 2 updates just for you hahah!



Tina (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 05:42 am (Fourteen)
Things are getting more complicated. Love it!

Author's Response: Yes haha I am the queen of drama :) Thanks for reading :)



dani86 (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 09:22 pm (One)
omg omg wow i love love love this story i look for updates everyday im hooked plz write soon on the edge of my seat

Author's Response: aww thank you! I will try to speed up the updating process asap :)



Keediluv (Signed) on May 29, 2011 02:14 pm (Thirteen)

What are you doing to us?!  Like, he's alive...seriously?!  I don't even know what to say.  Alive, in a completely messed up situation and missing our Abbey.  I don't even know what to say.  That was like the saddest chapter I think I've read in a long time.  Please, please let them get out alive.  I want Abbey to be with Justin but I also want him to be okay.  You are too good!

Ki 



Author's Response: Ahhhh. I was so scared to post this, and I thought twice...three times about going forward with the idea but the idea was too strong and it wouldn't go away.  I'm glad that you are accepting it though :) Updating soon :)



Keediluv (Signed) on May 29, 2011 02:00 pm (Twelve)

If Trace gives Abbey a hard time, I hope she puts that little fucker in his place.  She has to let him no that no matter the money he has, he has to respect her and that's that.  And if Justin cares about her the way he says, he'll do the same, regardless of the situation.  Justin doesn't like Sydney and yet, I bet there's respect given.  See, now I feel like I'm talking about real folks.  You are a beast! Really good update mama :)

Ki 



Author's Response: Lol you are too funny.  It really makes me happy that this story is affecting people this way, and that it seems to be really realistic! Thanks!



Lady T (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 01:00 am (Thirteen)
Wait a minute is this a dream?. Oh no he cant come back. Abbey and Justin need 2 get married and have babies. LOL! Can't wait to see whats next :-)

Author's Response:

No it's not a dream, lol.  You'll just have to keep reading and see what happens :) Thank you for the feedback!




Lady T (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 12:55 am (Twelve)
How about this chapter was SO GOOD that I had to read it 2 TIMES!!! it just keeps getting better and BETTER!

Author's Response: Haha wow! that's so flattering! thank you!!



mzmillion (Signed) on May 28, 2011 10:57 pm (Thirteen)
I knew it!!! I knew it was going to be something non-Trace related....(read my last review if you don't know what I'm talking about)..

Author's Response:

I know nothing...

 

Okay actually I do but I can't tell you lol.  Thank for reading :)




mzmillion (Signed) on May 28, 2011 10:46 pm (Twelve)
I for see I big crash coming to them and their relationship right at the top of the blissful newness of it and I see it having nothing to do with Trace for some reason, although I still hate him.



Joanne (Anonymous) on May 28, 2011 12:14 pm (One)

I really am enjoying a good story its been a while since I look forward to checking for a new chapter please dont make us wait too long.  I cant wait to see what goes on between them!



Author's Response: Don't worry I'll be updating shortly :)Thank you for reading!



Tanya (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 09:03 pm (Eleven)
GRRRR I JUST WANNA PUNCH TRACE!!!!!!!!! but im starting to see a nicer side of justin which i LOVE LOVE LOVE !!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL! Glad you love it!



Megan (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 07:23 am (Eleven)

what the hell is wrong with trace? why doesn't he want justin to be happy? Now I know where his "business first" trying to buy people off, and his looking down on country hick folks mentality comes from. Now Abbey is bringing out the authenticity of Justin and he can't take it that his little brilliant mastermind has gotten a crack in the stonewall. Awwww!

I think the only reason why Justin puts up with Trace is because he feels indebted to him for taking him under his wing, teaching him how to read, and making him a billionaire. But in the end, love overtakes it all! Loving this story and I am so pleased with your writing approach and your frequent updating. Don't stop!



Author's Response: Ah Trace, yes, I know he's very annoying at this point, and it probably won't get much easier til later on in the story.  Yes, Justin does put up with it for certain reasons . I love your analyzing.  it helps me write, and get in the mindset for this story, and it means a lot to me.  Thank you for your support :)



sam (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 01:38 am (Eleven)
This story is really good. I like ur approch to this lifestyle.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Updating soon!





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