Comments For Business First
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 22, 2011 12:49 am (Twenty Three)
oh nooo, things arent looking well. I hate to see justin slipping completely back to what he use to be. I'm glad he came in the room to talk to Abbey or so I thought - things blew up even more. I love seeing Abbey & Justin together with the boys like a family, even though Justin is being distant. I hope they are able to work something out. I want to see them stay together.
Author's Response: thanks for reading... it means a lot.
Author's Response: thanks for reading... it means a lot.
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 21, 2011 01:47 am (Twenty Two)
awww, its sad that they had a fight on Davey's birthday. im glad abbey told justin that it bothered her, even if he didnt want to hear it.
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond... life has been crazy... glad you're enjoying :)
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond... life has been crazy... glad you're enjoying :)
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 21, 2011 01:26 am (Twenty One)
wow she went to visit him! i was a little shocked at that. big twist in the story, can't believe Sydney is behind it. i thought justin was going to completely lose his marbles when he found out abbey went to visit trace.
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 15, 2011 10:56 pm (Twenty Three)
I absolutely LOVE this story. Just started reading it two days ago and I was instantly hooked. I love how Abbey and Justin are together when things are going well, and what Abbey brings out in Justin, but I don't know...he is definitely closed off. Abbey isn't perfect either though. They are a complicated, pefect-for-each-other mess and i love it. lol Abbey has got to understand where Justin is coming from on this Trump thing. To ask him to choose? I get her reasoning of why she's against it, but he has been working towards this way before she or the boys came into his NYC life. There should be a compromise going on, not a choice of who is more important. Sometimes she needs to keep her defenses/temper (i guess that's what I mean) in check and think about stuff before she goes off on him. They are both just quick tempered and say what's on their mind, and obviously that's been a problem. Anyway, again i LOVE this and can't wait to read more! I hope they bust Sydney's addicted butt so bad. Update soon! :o)
Author's Response: thank you so much for reading! It means a lot that the story has captivated you like this :) I hoep i can keep cranking them out for you!
Author's Response: thank you so much for reading! It means a lot that the story has captivated you like this :) I hoep i can keep cranking them out for you!
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2011 03:06 pm (Twenty Three)
love it cant wait for an update!
Author's Response: thanks!
Author's Response: thanks!
a_moments_grace (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2011 09:56 am (Twenty Three)
Author's Response: Dont' worry I have a feeling things will turn around :) Thanks for reading
Oh no! Things aren't looking good at all! Please, fix them! Justin is trying really hard, but I agree with Abbey, he's got to figure out what's important. I feel bad for him, though, because he really is making an effort to keep them around. Old JT would have left without even telling them!
Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Dont' worry I have a feeling things will turn around :) Thanks for reading
Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2011 12:23 am (Twenty Three)
Justin is really becoming the old prick. Not good.
Author's Response: Hopefully he'll brighten up soon! Lol thanks of reading
Author's Response: Hopefully he'll brighten up soon! Lol thanks of reading
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 10, 2011 04:50 pm (Twenty Two)
Phew, I just managed to catch up with this...and damn! I love the way you've developed the characters and how Abbey and Justin have grown together but still have so much to figure out. It's fantastic. And I can't wait to see what happens with Trace and this whole scandal thing. Lovely job! Excited for the next update!
Author's Response: So glad you were able to catch up! Thank you so much for the kind words!
Author's Response: So glad you were able to catch up! Thank you so much for the kind words!
Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2011 11:00 pm (Twenty Two)
I'm glad trace isn't guilty
Author's Response: thanks!
Author's Response: thanks!
dani1986 (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2011 08:11 am (One)
love the new chapter thanks for posting missed it so much! Now ugh Justin really I love him but I want to smack him the boy is clueless and I really hope he dosent lose Abby because of it. Cant wait to see what happens with bitch of the year poor trace. (cant believe im saying that yikes) but anyway Great job hope to see the update soon and hope things gives you a break to
JoJo (Signed) on Jul 09, 2011 02:30 am (Twenty Two)
Everytime I feel Justin's getting better he goes back to "business first" Justin!! I wish he wasn't so down on himself and I really do think he can find a good balance between family-man and business-man! I am still loving this story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I know, darn that Justin lol. He's just not seeing the big picture! Thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: I know, darn that Justin lol. He's just not seeing the big picture! Thanks for reading :)
Joanne (Anonymous) on Jul 08, 2011 10:52 am (Twenty One)
I am going crazy that is such a great story and there were updates so often but now I just seem to keep checking and nothing. Please don't give up on this story so many stories end up this way when they are so good.
Author's Response: OH don't worry I'm not giving up. I've just been running around like a maniac and everytime I've sat down to get through this chapter I've fallen asleep. Believe me if I could be cranking out more chapters for you guys right now I would be. I'm almost done with this one I promise! More soon!
Author's Response: OH don't worry I'm not giving up. I've just been running around like a maniac and everytime I've sat down to get through this chapter I've fallen asleep. Believe me if I could be cranking out more chapters for you guys right now I would be. I'm almost done with this one I promise! More soon!
Lady T (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2011 09:41 am (One)
thanks for the update! you already know that im addicted to this story. its like crack and i need more. lol. cant wait til you post more. justing and abbey just keep getting cuter and cuter even with all the drama around them.
pebblypoo (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2011 01:33 pm (Twenty One)
Oh my goodness thank you sooo much for posting again...this story really has me addicted. Post again soon please.
Author's Response: I'll be posting tonight or tomorrow :) Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I'll be posting tonight or tomorrow :) Thanks for reading!
Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2011 11:50 am (Twenty One)
I hate Kristy