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MissM (Signed) on Oct 23, 2011 04:57 am (Forty Five)
Wow Braeden is falling apart. He needs southern than Abbey right now. And I can't believe her mom would keep that letter from her ! 

Author's Response: He really is and her mom is a bitch for keeping that letter from her.  Not sure what's going to happen! More soon I promise and thank you for reading!



Tina (Anonymous) on Oct 23, 2011 02:53 am (Forty Five)
Wow, she actually got married? Crazy!

Author's Response: I know! More soon I promise!



SleepyME (Signed) on Oct 23, 2011 02:24 am (Forty Five)
Wow......I mean wow. I did not see her actually going through with it. There's no going back for Abbey now. Damn your good, keep it up.

Author's Response: Yes she diidddd. Lol thank you so much! More soon!



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 23, 2011 01:29 am (Forty Five)

I can't believe her mother kept the letter from her!! Well actually I do believe it! I just don't know what to think anymore...Abbey wants to be happy but she can't. I think things with Braeden are gonna get worse. She couldn't possibly think he was gonna come back the same guy. Nobody would coming back from all he went through.

Maybe contacting Austin can bring her and Justin back together. If they stop being stupid and lying to themselves they could get somewhere. Fix them please!!!

Love the udpate! More soon please!



Author's Response: I know...her family is so meddling though, it's really bad.  Braeden is a mess and all Abbey wants to do is be there for him, but he's so closed off that I don't know what she's going to do lol, I love how i say that as if she's a real person.  I'm glad you are enjoying! More soon!



SleepyME (Signed) on Oct 22, 2011 09:47 pm (One)
i love this story! Its good to see Justin trying to move on but I do not understand what is going on in Abbey's mind with what she's doing with Braeden. Did I mention I love this story?

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I know, it's confusing times for Abbey, and Justin too.  I'm so glad you love it, I'm working on the next chapter right now :)



Tina (Anonymous) on Oct 22, 2011 09:09 pm (Forty Four)
I need more

Author's Response: I'm halfway there...this chapter is long! lol



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 22, 2011 05:12 pm (Forty Four)
oh, no. what on earth are these two doing??? i'm intrigued to see why Abbey didn't respond to Austin's letter! i can't wait to see what's next! Great job!!

Author's Response:

Ah I know...it's crazy! Thanks for reading! More soon!




JoJo (Signed) on Oct 22, 2011 04:59 pm (Forty Four)

Really?! Danielle...come on Justin! 

What are we gonna do this these two? I just want to strangle them. I can't wait to see what you have in store!



Author's Response: I know, I hate Danielle...that slut lol.  More soon! I promise!



MissM (Signed) on Oct 22, 2011 04:52 pm (Forty Four)
Sigh. What are we gonna do with these two? 

Author's Response: Lol I don't know... There are things coming up though...promise!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 22, 2011 04:42 pm (Forty Four)
Thank You for the update! I was feening to find out what was happening next. Although I must say that I almost vomitted when I saw that Danielle called. I just can't. LOL!

Author's Response: LOL no problem! Thanks for reading!



Alixermixer (Signed) on Oct 21, 2011 01:18 pm (Forty Three)
I'm sorry, I know that she is in a slump right now but marrying him is not the right answer. This is going to blow up in her face. Brayden is going to get hurt, Barbara is going to let her ideas be known, her mother is finally going to be on her side and then out of nowhere Justin is somehow going to come back into the picture. It's gonna be a mess, :(

Author's Response: Confusing times confusing times...lol, Abbey is a mess, I know, you'll just have to read on and see what happens :)  Thanks for sticking with the story, hopefully I'll get another chapter up soon.



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 11:13 pm (Forty Three)

So, now we're getting married when our heart belongs to someone else... yeah that's smart. (Insert sarcasm)

What the hell is she thinking?  I mean I know her love for Braeden didn't go anywhere but trying to make something work that isn't working won't make anything better.  Though I love Braeden and I think it's totally fucked up what's happening to him, how is marrying him when he won't have her heart going to help.  

Now we're all in a tailspin.  Damnit, you and the wonder that is this damn story.  You've made my day love. :)

 

Ki 



Author's Response: So glad to have made your day! I know, it was a desperate move, but I don't think she knew what else to do.   It's pure craziness, and I hope i'm not playing with your emotions too badly.  Thank you so much for your amazing report! You are awesomness :) More soon...I was going to try and crank through this chpater tonight but I haven't been getting enough sleep and I think I need to get some extra tonight!  Tomorrow should be better :)



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 20, 2011 07:38 pm (Forty Three)

She cannot marry him!!! PLEASE don't let her do that!! Justin really needs to get his  head out of his a**! He is partially to blame...he could've stopped her from leaving!

I love  how often you update this story! Can't wait to see more!



Author's Response: Oh I"ve really caused and uproar with this one haven't I? Lol Yes, I agree Justin should have stopped her.  I enjoy updating this story as much as I can.  It's very fun to write.  THank you so much for reading! Updating soon!



jen (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 05:59 pm (One)
please tell me there is another twist coming up. like one where her mom contacts Justin or her sister. Abby can not get married to Braeden please don't write that or maybe austin runs away to Colorado then Justin has to come get him and realizes he needs her and stops this horrible event from happening

Author's Response: If i told you what I'm planning it would take the fun out of reading! I promise, the story isn't over yet :) Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot  to me :)



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 01:51 pm (Forty Three)
gahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! justin needs to COME ON!!! Loved the update...can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Justin needs to get his life together lol. I'm working on an update for ya :)





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