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Tanya (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2011 09:40 pm (Forty Eight)
UGH!!! I JUST WANT TO SMACK THE CRAP OUT OF HER!!!! she better listen to the bigger part of her! cause i dont know how much longer i can read this YOU CANT KEEP LOVE APART!

Author's Response: LOL oh man I'll try not to keep you on the edge of your seat for too long :)



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 27, 2011 09:24 pm (Forty Eight)

I must say, I'm proud of Braeden for not cracking Justin's face open because let me tell you, if that had been my hubby, that would have went WAY differently lol.  I need Abbey to listen to the biggest part of herself before she ruins five lives.  That's alot of damn lives girl, she can't possibly go through with this.  I'm so glad Braeden's home and alright and all that jazz, but like I said before, he's holding on to who she used to be, not who she is now.  That being said, I'm also proud of Justin (well after the whole bursting through the door thing) for showing her the part of himself that only she knows.  It helped her understand she made a mistake.  And I like that :)

Ki 



Author's Response: yeah i was surprised at Braeden for keeping his head lol. You analyze this stuff so well lol. Hopefully everything will work out for these two, but you know how the muse works...it does what it wants! Love you and your input! More soon!



MissM (Signed) on Oct 27, 2011 08:41 pm (Forty Eight)
Maaaaaan, she is stuck, stuck, stuck.

Author's Response: LOL ohhhh I know it!



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 27, 2011 10:37 am (Forty Seven)

The marriage is a farce because those two people are trying to hold on to who they used to be, not who they are now. Justin should just tell her how he really feels, and let the chips fall where they may.  That damn Abbey knows she's not the same girl anymore.  Once she and Braeden are honest with themselves, shit should get easier.

And once again, I'm sucked into your wonderful world of fiction.  Can't even tell you how good this shit really is,

Ki :) 



Author's Response: Thank you so much Ki! You know I love you, and I'm going to try to push through this chapter tonight as best I can! Love ya!



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 26, 2011 07:00 am (Forty Seven)
Oh how I can't wait to see what happens when they meet again.... *wink wink* :) loved the update! can't wait for the next one!!!

Author's Response: thank you! it's coming up shortly!



wpoohbear (Signed) on Oct 26, 2011 03:10 am (Forty Seven)
You're crazy girl. This is a good chapter. Reunion!!! Can't wait!! I hope Justin drops the 'tude and they can sit and talk. Love your writing and the twist and turns you take us on.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know..ahhh Reunion time! I'll have an update for you soon :) Promisseee



MissM (Signed) on Oct 25, 2011 05:57 pm (Forty Seven)

He's such a dingleberry. Just get on the fricken plane. 

 



Author's Response: LOL dingleberry. I love it! More soon.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 25, 2011 05:54 pm (Forty Seven)
omg. i literally can't wait to see what happens!!!!! and i LOVE that after all that time she still finds her backbone with him and actually argues back! they're just so perfect for each other!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I"m working on the next chapter now so hopefully more soon :)



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 25, 2011 07:54 am (Forty Six)
AUSTIN TO THE RESCUE!!!! So pumped to see what happens next! Way to go with this update!! :)

Author's Response: LOL. Thank you so much! More soon!



MissM (Signed) on Oct 25, 2011 05:43 am (Forty Six)
GO AUSTIN!!!!

Author's Response: squeeeeeeeee



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 24, 2011 11:45 pm (Forty Six)

I can honest to GOD say that I didn't see that coming!  Yay! I'm not happy that Austin ran away from home but he'll make Abbey so happy while he's there that it'll be worth it. At least I think.  Knowing how badly I want Justin and Abbey to talk, this is so freakin worth it lol.  This is a really good chapter but it also feels like the calm before the storm.  

Ki

P.S-I don't trust that Jessica/Braeden shit at all! 



Author's Response: See? I told you there was more to this lol.  Glad you liked it.  I don't know about Braeden/Jessica either...we'll see.  More soon lady! Love ya!



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 24, 2011 08:14 pm (Forty Five)
Dear Justin, PLEASE get your head out of your ass already. :) great update girlie! Hope things change here soon!!! can't wait for the next installment!!

Author's Response: thank you so much! more is coming! i'm halfway through the next chapter!



StarStruck24 (Signed) on Oct 24, 2011 11:01 am (Forty Five)
I'm glad she finally got the letter - but Braeden needs some help. And fast. I hope she's strong enough to either stay and help him through it or leave and find Justin again. Definitely can't wait to read more and see what happens.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'll have more for you soon!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 23, 2011 11:03 am (Forty Five)
I can't believe she went through with it!!! Poor Abbey, feeling stuck in this situation... I'm glad she finally got Austin's letter (at least Hannah has some sense left!) and I hope he gets to read her reply soon! Maybe that will queue Justin to come to her rescue!!! I'm totally still pulling for a happy ending for these two!!! Great update :)

Author's Response:

I know! Married! Can you believe it!There's more to come very soon :)




Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 23, 2011 11:02 am (Forty Five)

I think this is the first time since the break-up that I've realized how much this is really affecting the boys.  It's not fair that Justin and Abbey are trying to make kids understand adult concepts.  You brought this woman into their world just to have her gone...like they haven't already been through it before.  If anything, I hope you let communication between Austin and Abbey last so that they can at least know she loves them.

Justin's still an asshole.  And so is Trace.

 

You already know how I feel,

 

Ki

 

P.S- If Braeden winds up putting his hands on Abbey, I'm gonna kill you! :) 



Author's Response: Uh oh...sounds like you're reallll mad! I know there's lots of drama right now, but thanks for reading anyway.  You know how much I love you haha. More soon! I promiseeee.





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