What an incredible way of explaining ‘the ring.’ I felt like I was her and crumbling to pieces about seeing this ‘thing’ that represented everything and representing everything she was losing.I love Troll for Trace! Ha Was I secretly the inspiration for this story? I felt like I was this girl, I am this girl. Great job love ;)

Aww, i got all misty eyed..... that was a really good story girl i loved it! 

Very beautifully written. Nice job!

I want to kill you for making this tug at my heartstrings but that meant you did amazingly well. You have such a way with words and emotions that I'm envious of. Great job, as always.

I've already told you this, but I loved it!  ripped my heart out and had me all teary eyed.  You truly are gifted when it comes to writing and converying deep emotion.  <3

wow.  That was incredible and sad and heartbreaking and so...real.  I love the quote you use in the summary, too.  It's so true.  This was a fantastic start to the It's Gonna be May challenge.  Lovely!

noooo make them happy again!  Well written, heartbreaking.

That was beautiful.. *tear and I hardly read Justin fanfics...

Jeez woman that was freakin heart wrenching! But I love the conversation they had, the way it was so calm and "yeah this is really over." It felt very real to me. AWESOME job! Great way to start off the month!

Oh my goodness. This was truely beautiful. I really enjoyed your writing style.

Such beautiful prose. And a heartbreaking story. I love when emotion swells up off of the page! Thanks for getting us started!