musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Nov 05, 2011 08:24 pm (Chapter 8: Lookin' For A Good Time)
NOOO you just. Urgh. I expect an update ASAP. I love Jake's comment about the Ice Queen.

Author's Response:

You got it - I'll try to update as soon as I can!  Glad you're enjoying Jake's dry sense of humor...




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2011 07:38 pm (Chapter 8: Lookin' For A Good Time)

*dun dun dun* Well hello there..ahem..

I literally laughed out loud when I read these lines here "They stopped by the end of the bar. “I don’t mind. It’s a rare luxury to have the company of a real person at one of these things. You’re certainly better company than JC’s new plastic girlfriend.” LMAO!

This was a fun read, thanks for the update. :)



Author's Response:

I think Jake has the funniest one-liners, particularly when it comes to Bianca.  Thanks for the reviews - they are such motivators!!




Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2011 02:25 pm (Chapter 8: Lookin' For A Good Time)
Well damn that sure is a mood killer...damn Charlie. Glad that JC is really noticing Whitney. Good chapter :)

Author's Response:

I think "Damn, Charlie" should probably be the subtitle of this story, haha!  Glad you liked the update!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 02:40 am (Characters)
you asked me if there were particular stories I wanted you to updated and so far my 3 faves are he ate my heart, i run to you and when you got a good thing. haha girl, you're great with the cliffhangers!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the love - trying to get better about updating!  I'll definitely start with your picks!  And hopefully answer some of those cliffhangers...




Megan (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2011 10:44 pm (Chapter 7: Things People Say)
I love this story!! Love the relationship that Whitney and JC have going...damn Eric for ruining a potential date/goodnight for those 2. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you.  I love their relationship, too - could have been a sweet first date.  But, there are quite a few people in their way at the moment...



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 30, 2011 04:35 pm (Chapter 7: Things People Say)
as a jc fan i love all your stories, including this one. please update soon! (this one or anyone ;) )

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I'm so thrilled that you like my characterizations of JC.  Was there a specific story you were hoping I would update? 




theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 01:33 pm (Chapter 7: Things People Say)

O_O WHAT?! I despise the tabloids, if it weren't for Eric to come over and put those stack of magazines, JC would've gone with Whitney, and NOT Bianca..pssh. This was a good chapter, I liked it. Thanks for the updates.. :)



Author's Response: I knowww...Bianca, ughhh!



theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 01:26 pm (Chapter 6: Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You)

UGHH! Charlie, go back to your Cassie woman and leave Whitney alone..he likes her, JC likes her, Whitney likes JC, oh this is like watching a really good soap opera..HA!

And the way JC asked her to come with him on Saturday, and his friends are all into it. And who's Bianca?? LOL! Thank you JC for correcting her, its Whitney not Wanda.. :P *reads next chapter*




theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 01:17 pm (Chapter 5: Love This Pain)

YAY! Thats right Whitney, process it. ;) Charlie needs to go away somewhere..lolz

Now I like the fact that JC went out for the night with some friends, haha they called him hermit..lolz

But I would like to see where this goes, so gonna read the next chapter.. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, I love the bromance between JC and his friends - they will be around for quite a few adventures.  But, of course, Charlie isn't going anywhere anytime soon...that would be too easy...




theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 01:08 pm (Chapter 4: Something 'Bout A Woman)

lolz JC being nosy reading Whitney's text message from Charlie..haha.

And looks like the feelings for Whitney and JC are there, but its nothing serious...yet. ;)

And ooh..Charlie at her apt. Good chapter..




theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 12:45 pm (Chapter 3: American Honey)

These lines here "He was attractive, incredibly attractive. She knew he was good looking, but she hadn’t expected this. A kind of stop-in-your-tracks but remember-to-breathe attractive."  :D Tee hee..

Yeah JC, maybe it would be pleasant to have Whitney as an assistant 24/7. ;) *reads next chapter."




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 06:53 pm (Chapter 2: Hello World)

Yes Whitney, its time to start over. Wow, this isn't that bad

Now, Im glad that Whitney took the job as JC's assistant, and at least he's better now, so he can go home and sleep in his own bed. Nice job. :)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 06:40 pm (Chapter 1: If I Knew Then)
Thats right JC you need an assistant..hmm..I wanna see how this goes, so gonna read the next chapter.. ;)



TheCaseOf (Signed) on Oct 11, 2010 08:08 pm (Chapter 5: Love This Pain)

Something really cute about JC in this story - update soon?



Author's Response:

Glad you like it - promise I'll update this story next!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 24, 2010 07:51 pm (Chapter 5: Love This Pain)

You're off to a good start. I'm looking forward to what you have in store for this story.



Author's Response:

Lots more to come...thanks for reading!






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