She's baaaaack! With a vengence, too. LOL You already know my opinion on the first chapter, and this one kicked just as much ass. You are full of awesomeness (among other things, but awesomeness is predominant ;-) )
Looking even more forward to the third chapter *bounces*
I have a feeling I'm not going to like Justin very much in this story. A girlfriend? Really? Sigh....
I love how fiesty Hayley is, but she needs to decide what she wants! lol....one minute she's leaving the hospital saying she doesn't want to be there and the next she's staking her claim again and having the tramp thrown out. Obviously she's still in love with him and I'm anxious to find out more of their backstory and their relationship.
Keep up the great work! :)
Eww that girl already bothers me! Verrrrry interesting that Justin's parents didn't know about her. And now the reason why Trace feels so guilty is finally coming to surface.
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
LOL, she bothers me too, but she's supposed to. I guess because Justin and Haley were just separated, he wouldn't want his parents to know how long he'd been carrying on. Hmph, Trace should feel guilty, or so I think.
Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying.
Author's Response: I'm glad you approve! He might recover. ;) I guess we'll all have to wait and see if it's like we think. Thanks for the review.
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Author's Response: I am so glad you're liking this! More soon. Thanks for the feedback.
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So thrilled that you're enjoying! I shall update again soon. :)
omg! I'm the frickin edge of my seat here! Is he going to make it?! I need more, like, right now. You're writing the next part right now, right? Guh!
Awesome first chapter!!! :)
Author's Response:
Ha! Just the kind of reaction I was going for! And I already had the next part written, I just had to get my connection to cooperate.
So glad you enjoyed and let me know!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it. I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for the feedback. :)